|Reviews for The End is Where we Start From|
| xXCoral-RoseXx chapter 4 . 12/16/2009
Great chapter! I hope Alex and Shaz are only visiting someone and nothing bad has happened ! ]
I really love the way you write Alex and Gene in this ] x
| Symphony In Blue chapter 4 . 12/16/2009
Oh god, cliffhanger! I hope nothing serious has happened to Alex. Please update soon, I'm dying to find out what has happend.
| theHuntgoeson chapter 3 . 11/6/2009
Marvellous chapter with so much great descriptiveness and detail - Alex's flashbacks of herself as a child; Gene drawing a halo around his head; her image of their daughters; and that beautiful ring. So many super plot developments too - a nasty tense moment at the thought that Gene might want them to move into the street where she lived with Evan; the news that the dead Christine was Alex's teacher; and the discovery that Darren died before Christine. Wonderful - please give us more soon!
| Gem6 chapter 3 . 10/30/2009
Aw that is lovely!
| sash queen of the jungle chapter 3 . 10/30/2009
cracking chapter perfect balance between police work and all characters like ray, chris, shaz and even evan. loved the galex interactions and alex's thoughts of the future so sweet. nice to know that gene aspires to live somewhere posh. loved the offical engagement part and genes honesty. you have made me very happy. hope theres more
| Symphony In Blue chapter 3 . 10/30/2009
That was a great chapter! Nice and long too.
Gene and Alex are clearly both fantasizing about their future together, which I think is so sweet. Can't wait for more!
| theHuntgoeson chapter 2 . 10/17/2009
Poor Gene, it looks as though every chapter will end up with him failing to give her the ring! The description of the murder scene is genuinely shocking. So is the news that Evan has a partner - it didn't take him long to get over Caroline, did it? So who is the mysterious watcher in the bushes, and what does the note mean? Tell us more as soon as Uni and your PC let you!
| Novindalf chapter 2 . 10/13/2009
Oh I like it! And nice cliffhanger )
| sash queen of the jungle chapter 2 . 10/13/2009
Just read first 2 chapters I do hope theres more. Evan White's partner o. What will Alex make of this? Like to intercations of gene and alex. u are so cruel for jumping the gun with the proposal...but i like it very much keeping me on the edge of my seat. thanks
| Azuragal chapter 2 . 10/13/2009
great chapter! lookin forward to more! xx
| Azuragal chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
aw I love it...hope you can update soon ! Good luck with your 2nd year at uni...i know the feeling! x
| theHuntgoeson chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
Really good start, the dream was so realistically written that it had me worried, and Gene's proposal, and the backchat between them, are lovely. Please write more of this when you can.
| Symphony In Blue chapter 1 . 9/25/2009
Ooh I really like the start of this story! It's great :)