|Reviews for Those Damn Marines!|
| CrazyAce'n'PokerFace chapter 9 . 2/19
interesting what-if! splendidly done. :)
| Demon Flame chapter 8 . 11/18/2013
I hate that Usopp was killed off as he is one of my favorite characters. But you wrote it so beautifully, if he had to die before his time, then this was a good way to go.
| BlackPhoenixMage chapter 9 . 11/11/2013
i kinda wish you would continue this. unless yo have a completed work posted somewhere else.
| Ysaye chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
The intro sounds quite fun. I'll read the story sometime I've got more time on my hands. ,
| Grocamol chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
interesting prologue, a shame this was written and updated so long ago.
| Kagehana.Tsukio chapter 7 . 3/8/2013
gah i need to know the end of that flashback...!
| hp1piececraziness chapter 9 . 1/11/2013
This was certainly an entertaining story so far. You're right, this is the second marine!Luffy fix I've seen so far. And I've been hunting around on this site for a long time. This is a great story, definitely on of my favorites now.
| Lily Noir chapter 9 . 12/7/2012
Whoa, what an awesome story... I've got some ideas in my head as to what the 'conspiracy' really is (like waiting for Lu bust his shit out.. or sth along those lines ;))... I can't wait to see how you'll progress things, and how Lu's 'dream' will evolve... And, I've gotta say, you've done splendidly with the 'wait for Luffy', it illustrates just how and important character he is and the fact that the world really started to move when He started to move.
I can't wait for the next chapter, pweeease update as soon as you're able to
| Yuu3 chapter 9 . 12/6/2012
I'm not happy with the whole Tenzo part of a conspiracy thing. Especially since it involved Luffy a lot judging by Sanji's thought afterwards. I love secrets/mysterious but I MUST have the answers for them. Curiosity is a very very bad thing afterall. However in your AN, you mentioned Tenzou manipulating events for the sake of Luffy so I'll try to ignore my urges to annoy the hell out of you for answers. Plus, I quite like Tenzou. Love him, in fact. I tell can he is juz as loyal to Luffy as the cannon Straw Hat crew.
I'm also very very curious about that dream Luffy had. The one with Ben and Shranks and something mysterious on the ground. Since you said it a flashback, I don't think it Usopp's dead body. I wonder if you have a cat. Curiosity killed the cat, so if I don't get my answers, somebody's cat will die.
I'm worried. It's been two years, almost three, since you last updated. Are you still continuing this story? I hope so. I don't want to see such a wonderful story be abandon. I hope you will reply back, give me an honest reply on whether or not you are still writing tis story.
| Yuu3 chapter 5 . 12/5/2012
You know even after rereading this for god knows how many times, I still feel sad at this line. "Luffy doesn't really know what he wants in life anymore" It like Luffy, yet unlike Luffy. I feel so sad for him. And I still have a smile on my face whenever Zeff thought of faking his death for Sanji.
| Maggie-tan chapter 9 . 11/12/2012
I wonder, if they ever recruit Nami and if she'll become another voice of sanity on the ship -next to Tenzou.
Strength-wise and combat potential, I don't think she'd cut it -especially without the clima-tact. Since Usopp is dead (and I agree that without Luffy and company that he'd be dead) the clima-tact is not available unless the weapon was to be designed and made by someone else.
| The Darkest wizard chapter 9 . 10/30/2012
This is a great story! Please continue it soon!
| Gcatthewonderful chapter 9 . 9/30/2012
i love how,when luffy tells people about his big bro,they are like,"theres TWO of them?!"
| Gcatthewonderful chapter 8 . 9/30/2012
| Gcatthewonderful chapter 7 . 9/30/2012
that was maanssoppppppp...why was shanks sad?