|Reviews for Forever a Love that Stays|
| annabeth 2000 chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
| Celene Hudor Midnight chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
okay, you have a good plot, but it's rushed, and you shouldn't keep changing POVs, since it can get confusing. First you could split the one-shot so one half is Bella's POV and the other is Edward or you could write the one-shot in both point of views by just writing everything in both their POV's. Just letting you know.
| vortext chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
| EvelynSnow chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
aww that was a nice story! :)