|Reviews for Catalyst|
| the dud pistachio chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Sweet, sweet one-shot! Thank you for the fantastic read :)
| morgan-va chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
Fish trivia. In the middle of his kitchen on what, for most people, is date night. "Really."
Lol. Made me laugh. So them.
| Katniss730 chapter 1 . 9/24/2010
Cute :) That is how Booth should have approached the topic of a relationship...
| bitsygirl chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
Hi there - I've been following Faith Enough to Fall on LJ, and only just discovered you here on FF. I loved this oneshot - sweet and wonderful, but there was a poignant moment midway through that just cracked my poor little heart, in the best way possible:
"I don't know what to do," she says, and this time the fear is backed by raw vulnerability. His gut clenches. Maybe it isn't just too soon now. Maybe it will always be too soon. He feels something break inside him at the thought.
Just lovely. Thanks for this story!
| Phosphorescent chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
'As is true of most life-altering events, this one catches Booth unawares.' - excellent line
Your Bones' (nervous) rambling is great, and I love the way you work in what the fish represents.
My favorite line: 'He enunciates slowly and clearly. "I am not going to make love to you with that thing staring at me."' So very in-character for Booth, as is Bones' reaction to his qualms. Her realization as to the source of Booth's discomfort is particularly well done; your descriptions of her 'utter bafflement' and 'the slow dawn of amusement in her eyes' are visually rich.
| Granny Tg chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
"No way on God's green Earth is he going to make love to the woman of his dreams with a damned fish grading his performance." That was so Funny. I almost started laughing in the library. You are a very talented writer and i'm happy you can keep Booth and Bones in characters. :D
| Fantastical Fwooper chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
i always knew theres nothing as romantic as a fighting fish... so cute. :]
| meanderling chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
it would have been great already with the B/B awesomeness, but the fish blew this thing out of the water-loved it!
| amyylasee chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
this is a great fic, i love how sweet and tender booth is when he first tells her she is beautiful, the way he has decided he's waited long enough!
| Hazmatt chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
Adorable story! Absolutely brilliant! I really enjoyed it! Very cute!
| stormbinder22 chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
wow, i love this story. It's perfect. Now you're going to have me smiling all day, thank you. :)
| browner864 chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
This was too much fun to read! LOVED IT! I'm a sap for fluffy/happy Booth/Brennan so this just made my day - thanks!
| hopelessromantic549 chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
"Bones, this ... thing between us. I think it could be something special." He takes a breath, and her scent fills his lungs. It's a clean, straight-forward kind of scent, with a hint of flowers and sunshine behind it. "And I want that. I want it with all my heart." Reluctantly, he lets his hand fall away from her face. "But you have to want it, too."
i'm not entirely sure why, but this paragraph made me tear up. you did a wonderful job with the complexities of their coming together. it's all so very realistic - booth laying it all on the line, telling brennan he wants it all; brennan thinking it over logically, then confessing her fears, then giving in to emotion; and then the two of them coming together in relief and in love - and i applaud you for that.
thanks for writing this amazingly touching piece
| wavering-affections chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
So, so beautiful.
Of all the ways I've imagined *the* moment going down (and there are a lot) this is really captures a moment I can legitimately see happening on the show.
| flowertje chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
this is just perfect! this is how it has to happen! love love love it!