Reviews for Unplanned
dwright chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
WOW! I don't usually like angst but this was great.
Treestar2509 chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
Wow...your warning did not prepare me for this story. I cried my eyes out. What a tragically, beautifully, sad story. The last section killed me. Thanks for sharing. Well written.
pattm chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
Wow. I really shouldn't have skipped over that disclaimer considering I'm having a baby *today*. It was good though. Sweet, heartbreaking, well-written. I enjoy all your stories. Thanks!
jdc0630 chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
The Love of a Lifetime...

To find that one true love...for me, I've been married 3 times, & always thought this was the one...Now, at 58 years old, I look back & I can see that none of them were a 'True Love'...a person you give your very soul too...someone you would give your life for...

I alway's gave 100% of myself, & got lucky if I got 50%. It truly was both our faults...

but, now that I'm older...& wiser...(laugh here)...I find now that after being told I don't have much more than 3 more uears to live...I may Never find that one special love.

Your story was kind a slap in the face...to the fact that I didn't look before I leaped...I could have taken my time & maybe could have found that 'One Spcial Someone' that would be with me right now.

He was such a Strong father for Grace, & it took one hell of a man to have lived his life for their daughter...even with the need to be with her weighing out all else.

It was a beautiful & sad story...but, in the end he ended up with the Love of His Life...Bella.

It's still a ...'Happy Ever After'...for all eternity.

Thank you for sharing your story with me. Should have come with a *Major Kleenex Warning* thoug...had to stop & go get some...

Jamie Crabtree
Lavellan-ofthe-FreeMarches chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
*snot sob* This was so heartbreakingly beautiful.
jljkjjk chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
So sad, so good, so sad...
wizards30 chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
I found this story on Twilighed almost two years ago. I still cry each and every time I read it. Brilliant. A true love story.
CRAZYCARE4 chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
Wow you weren't kidding when you said this story was sad. I was a blubbering mess when I finished and as far as I'm concerned that's a sign of a great story if it can affect me that way. Thank you.
toreadornottoread chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
This story made me cry. I read it twice and each time it made me cry. Beautifully written.
retrogradation chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
oh my goodness, this gave me shivers. this is amazing.
fthsit chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
I have now learned my lesson to read disclaimers and author's notes. Im in my living room right now with my parents.. It's father's day today here in New Zealand. Thankfully they didn't notice that I was crying. Beautiful Story. I just wish you put the warning in the summary. So I could've at least prepared myself.
philo22 chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
This was heartbreaking! I can't imagine for anyone to live through something like that. Thank you for the warning though, really helped when the tears began and I didn't have to go searching for the tissue box! But yet I'm still tearing up while i'm writing this. Gahhh!
Iklepixie chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
OMG this is so touching it hurts. Poor Grace hoping that edward and bella did find peace
Chomping at the FanFic Bit chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
OMG, you warned readers at the beginning but I took a chance and read it at work and cried through my entire lunch hour. It sucked me right in and I couldn't help but continue. When she returned to him through his dream after Grace was born I totally lost it and the tears never stopped. That was such a sad but beautiful love story!

:)
Sassyvampmama chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
So sad, but so poignent. Thank you for sharing.
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