Reviews for Unplanned
Jasline Devereaux chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
Well, I expected Bella to pass on, but I didn't expect to cry by the end of this story. For a one shot, I have to say this is one of the best I've read yet.

Thanks for sharing!
aaahhhnnna chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
So your story made me sign up. I have been reading on this site for probably 2-3 years now but no story ever made me want to sign up. After reading this I felt like I had to say something. This story is amazing. I cried almost from the start to the finish. You have an amazing talent with words.
Bunch2009 chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
What a beautiful story. It made me cried. Amazing job writing it.
HoosierNina chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
So sad! This one broke my heart. You did a great job of making their love and his pain believable.
youngandmature chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
This is one of the most heartbreaking fics I've ever read.

I have a pile of tissues around me, I've been crying since Bella died and haven't stopped. And my heart aches.

This was so beautifully and powerfully written.

This cut my heart and still leaves me in anguish.
OcSickGirl chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
OMG that was so sad but romantic and loving, it made me cry.
Kim Ginsberg chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
OH GOD! SO SAD
dwright chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
WOW! I don't usually like angst but this was great.
Treestar2509 chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
Wow...your warning did not prepare me for this story. I cried my eyes out. What a tragically, beautifully, sad story. The last section killed me. Thanks for sharing. Well written.
pattm chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
Wow. I really shouldn't have skipped over that disclaimer considering I'm having a baby *today*. It was good though. Sweet, heartbreaking, well-written. I enjoy all your stories. Thanks!
jdc0630 chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
The Love of a Lifetime...

To find that one true love...for me, I've been married 3 times, & always thought this was the one...Now, at 58 years old, I look back & I can see that none of them were a 'True Love'...a person you give your very soul too...someone you would give your life for...

I alway's gave 100% of myself, & got lucky if I got 50%. It truly was both our faults...

but, now that I'm older...& wiser...(laugh here)...I find now that after being told I don't have much more than 3 more uears to live...I may Never find that one special love.

Your story was kind a slap in the face...to the fact that I didn't look before I leaped...I could have taken my time & maybe could have found that 'One Spcial Someone' that would be with me right now.

He was such a Strong father for Grace, & it took one hell of a man to have lived his life for their daughter...even with the need to be with her weighing out all else.

It was a beautiful & sad story...but, in the end he ended up with the Love of His Life...Bella.

It's still a ...'Happy Ever After'...for all eternity.

Thank you for sharing your story with me. Should have come with a *Major Kleenex Warning* thoug...had to stop & go get some...

Jamie Crabtree
Lavellan-ofthe-FreeMarches chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
*snot sob* This was so heartbreakingly beautiful.
jljkjjk chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
So sad, so good, so sad...
wizards30 chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
I found this story on Twilighed almost two years ago. I still cry each and every time I read it. Brilliant. A true love story.
CRAZYCARE4 chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
Wow you weren't kidding when you said this story was sad. I was a blubbering mess when I finished and as far as I'm concerned that's a sign of a great story if it can affect me that way. Thank you.
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