Reviews for Whole again Severus
COULDNT12761022 chapter 8 . 12/10/2022
Its not stupid or petty if the prank could (or most likely would) end in death or a life altering illness
tpaturi chapter 15 . 2/3/2022
Well, the time period this was made in really speaks for itself. This was written really well but glorifying rape? That's a no from me. I don't care whether Severus was raped over and over and over again every day for his entire childhood- it doesn't give him an excuse to do it to her.
Madylyne Hatter chapter 1 . 12/27/2021
i saved this like 8 years ago, and when im sad i always come back to re-read the series. its one of my favorites even now.
PandorWho chapter 24 . 11/9/2020
Ok, I need to say it ... FINALY ! You have no idea how many fic I read and non of them satisfied me and I was started to be desperate ! And them I find this wonder ! this is absolutly amazing ! Your story is very well written and so nice to read, your characters are so good and you get Snape so right (and that is a very difficult thing to do ! I know, I tried...) I like what you've done with Remus and Sirius, I love what you've done with Neville ! You did a really great job and I am so happy you shared it woth us and I am so glad I found it ! Thank you so much for that amazing piece of art ! And I do believe in Happy Ending too ! Thank you again !
PrismRootStarlight chapter 24 . 1/22/2020
I love love love this! Truly your characters were amazing and your English was fantastic! Thank you for this lovely story!xD
Kagenui247 chapter 22 . 8/26/2019
I’m having a problem seeing it on the Mobil app. It still works on the website tho. But this is my 3rd re read of your works. I love this whole series. o
Guest chapter 24 . 5/29/2018
You are an exquisite writer, and it is almost hard to believe that you are not a native English speaker yourself. I hope that one day you will release your own books and make money from your talent. This is my favourite Harry Potter fan fic to date!
TheAtlantisGirl chapter 24 . 3/2/2017
I absolutely love this story and the others. I think I've read this one three or four times now. Great job!
riverrat1 chapter 24 . 10/11/2016
Awesome story! Loved the plot with the 4th unforgivable curse and that it was the opposite of the mirror of erised. I also loved your characters. I imagine this is close to how Severus would have turned out if he had been allowed to live and find somebody who would understand him. Your writing is excellent knowing it is your first fanfic and English isn't your first language (the same here, btw). Wish I could be that good. This will definitely go to my favorites.
Now, without further ado, on to the sequel!
TrenchcoatTheVegbian chapter 24 . 9/11/2016
I'm crying!️️️️
Dream.Weaver.Stories chapter 1 . 3/19/2016
This is a great story. It is very interesting to read stories that don't simply follow the book plots. Your story is also great considering your first language isn't english? Well done!
bboops22 chapter 1 . 5/22/2015
wow serene is quit a character ben mmm and la is laurel is shy nice first chap
ArtRat chapter 24 . 2/25/2015
I absolutely loved this story. I can't wait to read the other installments! And bravo on this being your first story in English you have mastered the art of writing much better than some of the others. Thank you for the wonderful story!
ArtRat chapter 2 . 2/24/2015
That was very clever! "You can't set the world on fire whenever it doesn't obey your orders." ah! I love it!
VisforVixen chapter 24 . 3/1/2014
Wow. I don't think I've ever been so sad to see a story end. It was marvelous. Couldn't even tell English was your second language! Can't wait to read more of your work!
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