Reviews for Whole again Severus
ArtRat chapter 24 . 2/25
I absolutely loved this story. I can't wait to read the other installments! And bravo on this being your first story in English you have mastered the art of writing much better than some of the others. Thank you for the wonderful story!
ArtRat chapter 2 . 2/24
That was very clever! "You can't set the world on fire whenever it doesn't obey your orders." ah! I love it!
VisforVixen chapter 24 . 3/1/2014
Wow. I don't think I've ever been so sad to see a story end. It was marvelous. Couldn't even tell English was your second language! Can't wait to read more of your work!
VisforVixen chapter 5 . 2/28/2014
Loving this story!
StarlitStar chapter 24 . 11/27/2013
what a great story I enjoyed it...
SymmetricGirl chapter 19 . 10/17/2012
I totally love your story! XD really great! I LOVE YOU!

i really want to review last night but mom switched off the wifi.. TToTT
Carpe diem chapter 24 . 10/11/2012
That last scene with the Baron was cute. I'm surprised to hear English was not your first language. I enjoyed this fanfic nonetheless and find your OCs unique. I hope to see more from you one day!
Guest chapter 24 . 10/11/2012
excuse my language but HOLY CRAP! That was awesome! good job! No, wait, GREAT job!
Moonchild1212 chapter 24 . 8/27/2012
I absolutely LOVE this story! Thank you for keeping it up! It is appreciated! i can't wait to check out the other things you have written!
Moonchild1212 chapter 12 . 8/26/2012
I'm really enjoying your story!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
Woot! My name is laurelle!(just thought I'd share that with some complete stranger 0.0) Looking foward to this! chapter 24 . 12/26/2011
Beautiful story. I really enjoyed reading it!
Yemi Hikari chapter 2 . 11/23/2011
While I like the fanfic you've written, and I love the idea, I am going to have to stop here. First off, there doesn't seem to be much action going on in the story and it is honestly too slice of life I guess, but that isn't the words I am trying to get at. I personally don't think that Snape would treat an adult like a child, which is where I decided to stop. Also, I don't think that the other adult would have been able to take over the trunk this easily. It just feels off, despite being as well written as it is.
Yemi Hikari chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
Despite the fact there are quite a few believability issues, I found myself actually enjoying the first half of this chapter. And then we got to the sorting hat, and I couldn't help but shake my head. I think my first problem comes from the fact I don't see the Ministry forcing people to go to school. Second, despite the fact Rowling never mentioned other schools until a later time, I think it was something that honestly just didn't need to be said.

Personally, I feel the whole Sorting Hat thing was a joke though. I don't think it is possible for a person to not be sorted by the hat, because surely they have some trait that is important to them. Particularly if the people are an adult. I get the “mature students” being sorted into a separate house, which in itself is rare, because they are adults, but the honest truth is, this was a REALLY bad way to go about this whole thing.

I am going to check out the next chapter.
Prefrontal cortex chapter 24 . 10/28/2011
Heirate mich... xD

Das war wirklich eine der schönsten ff's über sev, die ich gelesen hab :3 Und deine Bedenken zu Anfang waren wirklich grundlos, dein Englisch ist sehr gut.

Englisch ist für mich auch erst die dritte sprache und ich will in zukunft auch ff's schreiben, du warst mir ein großer ansporn. Jetzt hab ich ernsthafte konkurenz und keinerlei ausreden mehr ;D

Als ich das letzte Kapitel gelesen habe, wurde ich wirklich traurig und ich HABE es mir schon aufgespart... aber dann gings mir sofort besser als ich gelesen hab das du für alle pairings noch eine ff machst :)

Also alles was ich jetzt noch sagen kann, ist das ich jetzt ohne mit der Wimper zu zucken alle 4 kästchen hier unten anklicken werde

ich hoffe sehr das deine kreativität dich nicht verlässt, ich freue mich jetzt schon mehr von dir zu lesen.

liebe grüße xox

(sry für den Roman xD)
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