|Reviews for Whole again Severus|
| Carpe diem chapter 24 . 10/11/2012
That last scene with the Baron was cute. I'm surprised to hear English was not your first language. I enjoyed this fanfic nonetheless and find your OCs unique. I hope to see more from you one day!
| Guest chapter 24 . 10/11/2012
excuse my language but HOLY CRAP! That was awesome! good job! No, wait, GREAT job!
| Moonchild1212 chapter 24 . 8/27/2012
I absolutely LOVE this story! Thank you for keeping it up! It is appreciated! i can't wait to check out the other things you have written!
| Moonchild1212 chapter 12 . 8/26/2012
I'm really enjoying your story!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
Woot! My name is laurelle!(just thought I'd share that with some complete stranger 0.0) Looking foward to this!
| shelleymsandersonyahoo.com chapter 24 . 12/26/2011
Beautiful story. I really enjoyed reading it!
| Yemi Hikari chapter 2 . 11/23/2011
While I like the fanfic you've written, and I love the idea, I am going to have to stop here. First off, there doesn't seem to be much action going on in the story and it is honestly too slice of life I guess, but that isn't the words I am trying to get at. I personally don't think that Snape would treat an adult like a child, which is where I decided to stop. Also, I don't think that the other adult would have been able to take over the trunk this easily. It just feels off, despite being as well written as it is.
| Yemi Hikari chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
Despite the fact there are quite a few believability issues, I found myself actually enjoying the first half of this chapter. And then we got to the sorting hat, and I couldn't help but shake my head. I think my first problem comes from the fact I don't see the Ministry forcing people to go to school. Second, despite the fact Rowling never mentioned other schools until a later time, I think it was something that honestly just didn't need to be said.
Personally, I feel the whole Sorting Hat thing was a joke though. I don't think it is possible for a person to not be sorted by the hat, because surely they have some trait that is important to them. Particularly if the people are an adult. I get the “mature students” being sorted into a separate house, which in itself is rare, because they are adults, but the honest truth is, this was a REALLY bad way to go about this whole thing.
I am going to check out the next chapter.
| Prefrontal cortex chapter 24 . 10/28/2011
Heirate mich... xD
Das war wirklich eine der schönsten ff's über sev, die ich gelesen hab :3 Und deine Bedenken zu Anfang waren wirklich grundlos, dein Englisch ist sehr gut.
Englisch ist für mich auch erst die dritte sprache und ich will in zukunft auch ff's schreiben, du warst mir ein großer ansporn. Jetzt hab ich ernsthafte konkurenz und keinerlei ausreden mehr ;D
Als ich das letzte Kapitel gelesen habe, wurde ich wirklich traurig und ich HABE es mir schon aufgespart... aber dann gings mir sofort besser als ich gelesen hab das du für alle pairings noch eine ff machst :)
Also alles was ich jetzt noch sagen kann, ist das ich jetzt ohne mit der Wimper zu zucken alle 4 kästchen hier unten anklicken werde
ich hoffe sehr das deine kreativität dich nicht verlässt, ich freue mich jetzt schon mehr von dir zu lesen.
liebe grüße xox
(sry für den Roman xD)
| Mercy Flynn chapter 24 . 10/15/2011
Wow! Well done! I really loved it, it had a good combination of storyline and romance, with all the characters being both in character and believable. I'm only pausing momentarily to write this before moving on to Whole Again Sirus. Keep up the good work!
| JoanieNobody chapter 24 . 9/12/2011
Beautiful. Just beautiful. I love how you fleshed out Snape's character and gave him a tragic history I could easily believe. I'm not even that much of a Harry Potter fan and I love this story. Thank you. :-)
| goodbyeevery1 chapter 4 . 7/28/2011
This chapter was absolutely adorable! From the lonesome books that 'softly protested' when put away to the crying Boggart and of course, Severus' kiss. Yum.
| Ms Llewellyn chapter 24 . 5/9/2011
awww...its so beautiful - they went through loads of shit, but in the end, ya it was awsome.
| cheesecake15 chapter 24 . 11/26/2010
What a FANTASTIC ending!
Either I am very emotional right now or your a exceptional writer, because I just read the last line and, i'll admit, I got the misty-eyes.
Anyway, I have been enthralled in your story, and I wanted to thank you for coming up with the brilliance of it.
. xx .
| malpal chapter 24 . 8/26/2010
Wow...I thought this was a great story. I'm very impressed with it being your first one you wrote for fanfiction and he first one in English. Congratulations! Next time, you might want to have someone re-read it for you because there were a few words missing here and there and misspelling of names such as Madame Pince. But other than a few minor details, I really enjoyed your story and I can't wait to read the next one in the series. Great Job!