|Reviews for Jumping Fox|
| Aladdinina Magi chapter 5 . 4/6/2014
Gah this story is confusing
| tygerburningbright chapter 6 . 2/13/2014
So long with no update make this seem as if this was dead... This is a good fic and I truly hope that you continue on with it.
| tylermech66 chapter 6 . 11/30/2013
I like this but it seems to be dead, I normally don't bother with reviews for stories that have not been updated as long as this one but I hope tht this one review will push that edge.
| tylermech66 chapter 4 . 11/30/2013
even starved children being picky? I doubt it...
| mad maddy chapter 6 . 9/14/2013
doing great keep going! I hate it when authors don't finish.
| beserkerbeast chapter 6 . 4/6/2013
Cool story, want some more
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 6 . 11/8/2012
AU Tricky. Crossover Tricky. AU x Crossover Near impossible to pull off without the story devolving into a storm of wildly OOC Mary-Sues. You've pulled it off so far, but... darn it, deadfic! (Or at least long dormant.)
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 4 . 11/8/2012
On to the next chapter.
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 3 . 11/8/2012
Looks interesting, but... WTF is going on?
Also, you need a beta. Nothing story-breaking, but you have a lot of minor spelling/grammar mistakes scattered around. Memorably, you spelled "it" with an extra "t" at the beginning in the opening of the first Titans scene.
| Sharkdude5 chapter 6 . 8/13/2012
| Formerly BM Jr chapter 6 . 8/6/2012
yo mate, what's up and all that.
first off, this story is a serious clusterfuck, and I wouldn't throw that word around lightly, there is so much unanswered in this story it's hard to even keep track of everything.
second, Naru-Raven, i can sense it
third, and probably most important, especially since it's pushing the limits of my moral compass, ARE YOU STILL PLANNING ON UPDATING!
I'm curious cause it's been roughly 8 months since your last update, and trust me, I know how taking longer to make new updates helps make you lose interest in a story,
but the reason why, I'm kind of tempted to adopt this story, mostly cause I see promise in it, and I'd rather not have something this insane get taken down or lost in obscurity.
though, I don't want to have anyone come and harass me about taking it without permission, thus, we reach an ultimatum.
I am planning to give you a month to respond, following that, If no response is given, I will take the chapters already published, do a bit of editing, cleanup, and the like, and publish it on my own account, though of course not without claiming it as your story originally, and holding off the right for you to demand me to remove it.
seriously, I don't want to piss anyone off, but I dunno if your around anymore, and I don't want to wait for too long for a response, or have any angry people on my back.
I've managed for 6 years to not plagirise or piss off anyone on the site, and I'd like to keep that up.
Thus one month, hope to hear from you with your acquiescence or refusal before then, lest I make some edits and repost this story, probably with a new name, a few changes, and as a pure Naruto story, with Teen titans overtones...and probably less world travel and confusion...
bye now .
| Rayne the Fox chapter 6 . 7/30/2012
Nice story i really like this chapter Naru's way of handling things makes me laugh! well done chapter and story so far keep it up!
| Snipa chapter 6 . 6/5/2012
I had almost forgotten about this story XD
I was searching FFN when I found it again. It's doing great so far, and I hope to see more written by you in the future!
| TwiliFay chapter 6 . 5/3/2012
Epic this is great I love it way to go hope to see more
| SongDragon chapter 6 . 4/2/2012
this chapter was good, the last one was ok but i like this one, continue in this vein please :)