|Reviews for The Last Unspoken Summer|
| eva-david chapter 8 . 11/2/2012
Sad but somehow it suits them. I think this could very well have happened. Can't wait to read the sequel :-) Also, before I forget; do you speak Hebrew?
| Indygodusk chapter 8 . 7/24/2011
This was absolutely delightful. I really enjoyed the way you used imagery and crafted your scenes. Thanks!
| propelled chapter 8 . 6/11/2010
I stumbled upon this story along time ago and just found it on my favorites list... now that I have finally had time to read it, I'm so happy that I did. The ending was so touching and heartbreaking. Excellent job
P.S. I loved the mix of Hebrew and Italian
| Team Rosalie chapter 8 . 5/10/2010
gr8 stry! luv dit! perfect!
| MoveForward chapter 8 . 2/8/2010
| PurpleOrchid85 chapter 8 . 1/23/2010
I've enjoyed this fic...
I have tried to translate the Hebrew Tony and Ziva said in the sms messages, but no luck.
So for future reference, put the English translations in a footnote so we know what they said.
| Gemcity08 chapter 8 . 1/21/2010
This is heartbreaking, but beautiful. I've thought a lot about that summer, and this is such a great explanation. Hopefully their separation is remedied soon :) Wonderfully written, I love it!
| Cricket Songs chapter 8 . 11/12/2009
This is really good.
I'm glad that you've taken it upon yourself to go in-depth with that one vague summer, since The Powers That Be obviously have no plans of returning to it. :( And you've done a nice job of it, too! Probably one of the best fics of its kind that I've stumbled across.
| Starving For Attention chapter 8 . 11/2/2009
Aahh that was so good! I always wondered what happened during that summer. Intriguing.
That was really well written, too :D I'm glad I found it!
| zatl chapter 8 . 10/20/2009
this story is too perfect for words. :)
| zatl chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
I loved this the first time I read it, and now I'm reading it again, and loving it just as much :)
| AerynB chapter 6 . 9/27/2009
I should've asked this before, but what woke Ziva up so suddenly? Was it a bad dream? She said it was an "occupational hazard." Was she dreaming of the people she's killed? Yeah, that seems the most likely. Hmm...I think I answered my own question. Sorry 'bout that. *blushes*
| AerynB chapter 8 . 9/26/2009
*sigh* I can't tell you enough how much I love this collection of stories. You write so incredibly well. You get that Tony's childishness is mostly an act and that he can be a grown-up when he needs and/or wants to be.
I hope you're writing something about the recent premiere. Did you like it? I'm trying to write something but it's pretty much crap. :( I figure I just need to get it down so I can sleep peacefully at night, you know.
Anyway, your fic is fantastic, as I've said numerous times. I'm so glad I found it. :)
| mia58 chapter 8 . 9/26/2009
Knowing what's to come, the last line is so heart breaking. Never the less, the entire story was a joy to read once again. At least they had happiness for a little while, sigh.
You know what I'd like to see? A story from you about how the whole Rivkin thing would have turned out differently if Ziva and Tony had these feelings between them in their past. Just wishful thinking.
| AerynB chapter 2 . 9/26/2009
I can see this so clearly. You have their characterizations down so well. Great chapter. :)