Why the fucking hell did you spare Dumblefuck?!

Other than that, great story!

A good read

Harry with a backbone is like an orgasm wrapped in bacon and covered in melted cheese. Lol I loved this story is what I'm saying. It's well written with decent character development. Usually in stories like this the plot seems rushed but even fast paced it was perfectly balanced between the action and dialogue. Thanks t for your work I hope you continue to contribute to the works on this site.

Great story, but the old man should've still went to Azkaban though.

Yes, Another excellent job of story telling. Love the way you view Harry...capable, wise, mature for his age, moral, strong hero type but not silly hero.

I like this story so much! It's one of my favourites harry-kicked-dumbledores-ass-storys and i really like that dumbledore is not evil, but just olf and crazy. But the best thing is what Hermione says about the Prophecy! Awesome!

Robert, it was fun reading this positive, life affirming story. A lot of the themes we see in HC were to be found here: the breaking down of class distinctions whether they be blood-based or goblin-muggle-magical, the introduction of Barchoke and the goblin society in general, the inclusiveness where Harry and Hermione judge others on their own merits not on what group they belong to, and finally the H/Hr relationship, with their ability to get things done even at the highest levels.

Thanks for all the work you put into your stories! - Nicolas

Robert, just started this fic to read while waiting for Sundays to arrive. Good start on this fourth year/TWT fic. Whenever I start listing the many ways in which Dumbledore utterly failed Harry, the tournament and how Albus allowed people to treat Harry quickly jump to mind. I really like the use of the TWT contract automatically making Harry an adult. I wonder if JKR realized how the more creative of her readers would turn those events into Harry being an adult. Interesting that Dumbledore never mentioned it, as he should have immediately known its significance.

Quick question: was Barchoke always the name of the Potter Account Manager or have you gone back and changed it? He's nearly as helpful in this fic as he is in your hugely popular Harry Crow. - Nicolas

good story

It have ben a long time pasing - from I did read tis story.
And I'm re-reading it - and it sill get to me that - I did read alll night long -
but bit not come to the end og story - I'm back to read the rest today.
Thank you again for this good story.
Smargden
If I did not - put it as a favorite - I do that now.
/S

very good

Nice work!

totally excellent chapter. Had me laghing my socks off.

Wish there was more love this story you did an amazing job.. Keep it up with the rest of your stories

Who is Dan Ganger?