Another fine work! Thanks!

Amazing story! However your ending was a bit rushed imo, it also wasn't left on a giant cliffhanger. Overall an excellent read.

oh Barchoke. I already love it

A sweet ending, despite Dumbledore getting away.

Never been much of a fan of damsel Hermione being left behind for her own good. Harry and Hermione have always been stronger as a unit. I can understand the argument, but it cast a nasty shadow on the end of an otherwise very good and fun story.

Right on target. Such a beautiful reward for our loyal judges.

Few things more enjoyable than watching Snape get shafted.

Hahahaha, what a beginning. Ron's hand looking like hamburger meat? That poor hall, they'll be subjected to him trying to eat it in a moment. Love me some cheeky Harry. Ans it only gets better by having Hermione immediately on board too.

Great story! Thanks

excellent story well done

Don you're one hell of an author I'm telling you right now I just finished chapter 1 and I'm already hooked I am intensely enjoying reading your stories thank you for writing them it's nice seeing that there are some authors out there the actually put more than five minutes of work into their story.

I think Dumbledore in a manipulator.
Ron gave me a little pity.
I liked that Amos is the Minister of magic.
Harry always good person.
Kira

What a nice gesture to go to the orphanage.
I like the part where marauders do their thing with the Dursleys.
Emma and Dan love Harry.
Kira

Harry's proposal seems good to me.
Peter should run away before Voldemort kills him.
Kira

I really like your beginning.
Harry is verbally beating Dumbledore.
Ron is very jealous as always.
Kira