Reviews for Family Matters
JenniferJ chapter 14 . 8/28/2016
I've only just found this series and wanted to say how much I've enjoyed reading them. You write the relationships between all the characters so well and Tempest is a complete delight.
janet1982 chapter 14 . 2/6/2016
awesome )
Nightmother chapter 14 . 10/12/2014
Woot! God these stories. I thought this was going to be a...somewhat happy story all the way through but you threw me that curve ball with the disease. I should have known
Thoroughly enjoyed reading. Making me more and more interested in other transformer fanfics out there.
Rosabel Moonstar Snape chapter 5 . 5/29/2014
The Fox Familiar chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
I've heard Phoenix13 is the snob of the Transformers fandom, and it serves well that she lives up to that. In any case, your entire roster is nothing but gut-wrenching, badly written porn, OOCness, and general faggotry that needs some Hellfire.

So let me get this straight: Ironhide clearly had something with Chromia, yet he wants to shove his spike up Optimus Prime's exhaust pipe. Totally makes sense. Cue some deep, faggot plot and lots of angsty whine and sparklings!OMG and other inane shit. Who cares? We don't. Plus, Optimus Prime has Elita. But she's never there because she's such a nasty cunt.

In these stories there's always the family-building, with tons of butt-fucking, children-making, and other stuff real-life gay idiots do when they try to be normal. Add onto the fact that these are robots and they seriously have better shit to do, but who cares? It's love!

Ironhide is older than Optimus Prime, dude. It's fucking weird seeing them fuck. Then again, I'm not a sick fuck who gets off to this, so there.
SeventhEdition26 chapter 14 . 10/29/2013
I love the way you have kept the leader personality with Optimus, kept him gentle and caring about his sparkling's without making him a complete wimp. That's happened in a lot of the fics I have read so I'm glad you did it right. Well done, I am enjoying this series immensely.
trace nivens chapter 14 . 5/13/2013
this story is very good I like it. I cant to read pitch I hope you get done with it soon.
Phoenix51 chapter 14 . 4/10/2013
I have read all of your story's at least 10 times, and each time I finish them I come to the same are the grandest Transformers fan-fiction writer EVER! Thank you sooo much for sharing the wonderful tale with us!
Animelvr chapter 14 . 2/24/2013
You are so talented! This fic was beautifully written..felt like I was there living it .
technoWriter15 chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
So cool
Sunstreaker's Girl chapter 14 . 6/1/2012
Oh... This was a sweet ending for a story that had me panicking for click. I really thought Megatron would attack or more Bots would offline from this disease. Thank you for continuing this into another story. I can't wait to read Pitch now.
Sunstreaker's Girl chapter 6 . 6/1/2012
"What, you don't want to hold hands in the glow of the microwave?" OMG! This line cracked me up! I have tears streaming down my face right now! I love this fic as much as the other 2!
lisa.demonic.angel chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
femme4jack chapter 14 . 7/6/2011
Ah, very sweet! I really am enjoying the developing dynamics between Ratchet and Scree, and the cosmic rust outbreak was heartwrenching. Well done.

The only part that confuses me is the birth business. If earlier he could open his plates and Mikaela could see the sparkling cocooned right there, I'm not sure I understand why so much has to move out of the way for the birth to take place, but I engaged suspension of disbelief and really *felt* OP's pain there. Not a critique, just a hmmmmm...
Supermoi chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
I love all of your stories so far! They're great and very enjoyable! Looking forward to this one too!
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