Reviews for Heartbeats
Carolyn chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
Hi :) I really liked your story. Beautifully written and very thoughtful, almost sad in some ways.
The Exile chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
I read one paragraph of this wrong and now have a mental image of a kitten in a suit of armour

Excellent writing, I really love the atmosphere.
Arrowtipz chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
This writing is so great its epic quality...no...not epic...Legendary.
Scarletty chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
"Ain't they just as much a part of this city as the rest of us?"

That was beautiful. It was so very touching, I really feel like adopting a cat now.
Llewlyn chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
Marvelous. I love the way your intertwine your characters, and timeframes. Thank you for writing this :)
Iceworth chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
I saw this linked on the nano forums - beautifully written, and I really enjoyed it! I really love the life you gave to Timmy especially. :)
Aideyn Earthen Ring chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
Amazing. \ If this is 'practice' writing, I am in awe to think of what your works are when you're really trying. I hope you post more World of Warcraft stuff in the future. Congratulations on a truly moving short story. You should submit it to Blizzard, Or at least the Hearthstone Tavern podcast.

Have a good life, Aideyn
garnet chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
one word awesome
Lord-Haw-Haw chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
I'd say this is a bit better than pratice writing, almost brought a tear to my eye.

Marvellous,

Lord-Haw-Haw