Reviews for When Your Gone
Hyuuga-Sword chapter 7 . 3/29/2011
I liked this story a lot. I think it has a good pace to it. I mean nothing seems to be happening to fast. Though there are small spelling mistakes here and there (mostly like "actted" and "Starfire though,") so spend some time reading it over once or twice.

Personally the chapters don't seem too short to me for some reason. I found that good amount of things happened in the chapters. Oh and I liked the filler. xD (Random comment)

Keep up with your story. D
Suki-Itami chapter 7 . 11/29/2009
Aw...! That's so cute, and so sad! Please update soon!
3rd Victoria chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
It's supposed to be "When YOU'RE Gone" by the way. You might want to consider changing it.
Suki-Itami chapter 6 . 11/7/2009
Aw! T.T I almost cried when I read this story! Please update it soon, I must know what will happen!
Teentitan-X chapter 5 . 10/24/2009
wow nice work...and SHUT UP! I DONT CARE IF THE CHAPTERS ARE SHORT! ITS A GOOD STORY! just make like...tons of chapters and you'll be alright. besides my chapters are short too but my audience DOESNT CARE! you are a good writer, dont give up and keep trying!
Chingon chapter 3 . 9/27/2009
short chapters but good story

i want to read more :3