Reviews for Onikage
Guest chapter 61 . 9/26/2015
Update please
Wolves-of-Insanity chapter 51 . 9/7/2015
Kakashi should have taken the memorial stone for old times sake that would have been golden...
Guest chapter 10 . 6/28/2015
no offense but you seriously need to work on you wording just a BIT more.
KizoAnimefan01 chapter 61 . 5/10/2015
make more chapters please i like the story but could you start writting yeah instead of yah?
Nathaniel chapter 8 . 4/2/2015
so far love this story but the grammar is terrible you should reread this story and fix a few things like for instance I keep seeing 'shut up' written as 'shot up' and 'grin' as 'green'
matt951 chapter 1 . 3/18/2015
NICE
Shikage716 chapter 33 . 2/9/2015
its a good story man but you have to put more into the converstaion it sounds as is you are throwing it together to get it done and your spelling and grammar is atrocious
godlikenaruto95 chapter 6 . 1/1/2015
This is the most poorly written story I have ever read. If you can't write properly don't write at all
xXRythianXx chapter 7 . 12/16/2014
Love your story but it needs better grammar.
doctor strange chapter 61 . 6/8/2014
Cool story. Cool line. Cool thrill. But your chapters are too short gaki. Please mail me when you write a new chapter. JA NE DATTEBAYO
WanderingMagician chapter 16 . 5/22/2014
COOL!HEY,HOW DO YOU ROLL A SENBON?
WanderingMagician chapter 4 . 5/22/2014
Naruto: I WONT DIE! *starts dancing around*
Guest chapter 10 . 5/20/2014
God there are so many spelling errors...
And the history you created is just crap
You made it sound like no one can become a powerful shinobi without a bloodline
And its jounin not junnin
Its chunin not cunnin
Guest chapter 2 . 5/20/2014
How does a kid who hasn't even started academy yet and never touched a weapon know which weapon he prefers? Things like this comes from experience that he doesn't have..
And the metal plates stuff, he doesn't even know how to kick properly and he is looking for more power?
You should have brought up this weapons shop stuff after awhile in the academy...
Guest chapter 7 . 1/31/2014
Your grammar is shit right now
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