Reviews for Bella's M&M
tulips3 chapter 34 . 8/16/2013
I enjoyed your story! :)
rainbow1825 chapter 33 . 5/22/2013
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Guest chapter 34 . 1/30/2013
You had a rather interesting storyline, but you could have done so much more with it. You might want to look into getting someone to prooff your writing. There are some major issues with your vocabulary, punctuation, and grammar. You should look into having go throughthis story with a fine toothed comb. I know you are better than this.
rosalie2022 chapter 6 . 7/26/2012
ha ha he figured it out just mere hours before they meet
doddlebug chapter 20 . 6/18/2012
It's different but I like it.
musicflare87 chapter 34 . 3/3/2012
oh my... i think u did a really good job writing this story, thank you so much for sharing it! ) )
musicflare87 chapter 33 . 3/3/2012
hahaha go EM
musicflare87 chapter 32 . 3/3/2012
uh oh a missing lauren is never a good thing...
musicflare87 chapter 31 . 3/3/2012
good chapter
musicflare87 chapter 30 . 3/3/2012
*le sigh* i feel like i can finally breath
musicflare87 chapter 29 . 3/3/2012
*bites nails*
musicflare87 chapter 28 . 3/3/2012
oh shit oh shit!
musicflare87 chapter 27 . 3/3/2012
*tears*
musicflare87 chapter 26 . 3/3/2012
poor bella and edward
musicflare87 chapter 25 . 3/3/2012
great chapter
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