on one hand, this is a very accurate depiction of a near canon harry. problem with that is canon harry is an immature child .thats works great for kids books, but awful for any fanfic you actually want the readers to take remotely seriously.

so if the story only really starts AFTER the second event...what is the story actually about? the third event alone isnt exactly a ton of content, and i dont think anyone wants to read 400,000 words full of nothing but relationship stuff, so is there an actual plot? or is the story just gonna copy canon but with waifus?

Again this displays Dumbledore's arrogance. This is where he should have involved the Department of Mysteries. Surely horcruxes would come under their brief and he could have asked them not to disclose their findings. Why does he seem to think he is the only authority.

It is really annoing that they have french accent when thinking, that doesn't make any god damn sense...

so is this abandoned?

harry is definitely descended feom dorea

why in the world would he share a room with ron still

Damn, I am genuinely disappointed to have caught up to the current chapters. I wish there were more. Alas, I shall have to suffer while I wait for more of this excellent tale.

They just treated the house like a theme park ride while the dursleys were still living there? Oh, im dying

i know it's been a while. but I hope you continue this story. this the second story of yours that I've loved

Lol! Lucius with the cup.

You know this is the first time I have seen an author actually follow through on someone rescuing Harry from Tom in the graveyard. Its something I thought would be blindingly obvious considering that in many settings the opportunity is there, but no one ever takes it. I have to applaud you, and by the by - still one of the best Potter fics I have read. Excellent writing that shows you can ship harry/hermione at this late stage (post ginny and ron into the picture) without bashing the weasleys, and the actions of those weasley family members and dumbledore all make sense without making them mental or evil.

The dialogue and characterization for dumbledore was on point. So many try and fail, or just dont even attempt it and instead mischaracterize him.

Honestly, the prose has been excellent, the characterizations on point, and the POV of Fleur is quite refreshing and interesting. So far I give this 6/5 stars, and cant wait to read the rest of the story if its up to this level of quality. Well done, author.

why not whisper the spell. cant do it silently but no reason to yell