Reviews for I Need to Breathe
SPH chapter 56 . 9/15
Your tales are wonderfully detailed and engaging, but emotionally exhausting. I cannot imagine you are unaffected by the process of producing it. But I do hope you keep writing. :)
Poledne chapter 1 . 7/10
I agree.
Guest chapter 56 . 1/30
This is...without a doubt...one of the best fics I have ever read.

Amazing. Truly amazing.
Mrs O S chapter 56 . 9/9/2016
Good job!
Nice story.
Thanks.
Guest chapter 56 . 7/7/2016
Brilliant!
Clarine chapter 56 . 5/23/2016
J'ai aimé votre histoire et, paradoxalement, détesté vos personnages. Je n'arrive pas à trouver de l'amour dans cette relation totalement dysfonctionnelle. Severus est odieux et Hermione complètement mollassonne à revenir vers lui encore et toujours.
Même leur relation autour d'Abby est complètement malsaine ; elle est présentée comme une espèce d'appât pour faire revenir Hermione. Bref, 2 personnes totalement déséquilibrées dont je vois la relation comme l'expression d'une obsession plutôt que d'un amour qui renforce et soutient l'autre.
Malgré cela, j'ai été suffisamment prise dans votre fiction pour voir jusqu'où cela pouvait aller. En fait, j'aurais mieux vu une fin tragique compte tenu de leur failles, à mon avis irréconciliables.
Guest chapter 24 . 3/20/2016
Why is Hermione such a doormat in your fic? She has taken on Voldemort, burgled Gringotts and infiltrated the ministry while on the run and a price on her head. Her new problems are petty in comparison. HG is badass, this HGS needs a slap and to be told to grow a spine.
Sawmill chick chapter 56 . 2/23/2016
Great story! Love the angst!
farsideomoon chapter 56 . 1/23/2016
;-)
farsideomoon chapter 54 . 1/23/2016
I have a hard time saying positive things about Hermione for some reason, but less urge now.;-)
farsideomoon chapter 50 . 1/22/2016
Yeah, what is she looking for? Why can't she want what made her more excited and happy than anything else again? Besides that the same thing that created the happiness created one of her greatest heartaches.
farsideomoon chapter 48 . 1/22/2016
Wow, awesome surprise!:-D)
farsideomoon chapter 47 . 1/22/2016
Lord, this is intense. But those ILY's couldn't of come at a better time. It would of been nice if Severus could of shouted it. JS
farsideomoon chapter 40 . 1/22/2016
This is really breaking my heart.
farsideomoon chapter 37 . 1/22/2016
My word, there is no end to them having things sorted out.
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