Reviews for The MisAdventures in Wonderland
angels04 chapter 2 . 9/16/2010
Wow Ladies...this was more than hot. I feel like I am getting a two for one, since this was one of the ideas I wanted to see also. How is Kitten ever going to top this Bday gift next year? I think just dinner and a birthdy cake may not cut it after this. ;}
jackspergirl chapter 2 . 9/16/2010
you know how much i love you both? yes you do, but still love to hear me saying it! i really missed this two nutcases, ok and even Bella, it's ggod to see them come out and play.

Thank you

JG
MaleficentKnits chapter 2 . 9/16/2010
happy birthday, Addictsper! damn that was hot!
JazzygirlCullen chapter 2 . 9/16/2010
YAY! ))

Even tho I've read this several times already, I haven't written a formal review so here it is )

Awww, your AN at the start got me all fangirly and giddy and happy ) I LOVE YOU too! Both of you ) I know real life stinks sometimes hence why I've been MIA the past 6 months, but I am always still here and just an email away if you need anything )

So yeah. The outtake. HOLY MAMA! It's been weeks since I've read it and I still get all hot and bothered when I think of it **fans self**

OK I gotta tell everyone too. The main reason I REALLY wanted this outtake was not cos I'm a pervert like that (...Um...erm...actually I am LOL) But aside from that, I'm not a Bella fan at all, actually sometimes she annoys me so much I wish the newborns got to her! So the threesome wasn't for the benefit that I wanted Bella to get some good Jasper lovin' Altho DaS version of Bella was actually cool, this was all mostly for Jasper's benefit. I couldn't stand that Edward (who is annoying too) got to see something that Jasper didn't. Like you said: Eat your heart out Eddie-boy. Score one for my fave Kinsper )

I really loved how reading this brought back the characters I loved so much again. Even tho they lived a long happy life, The-Notebook-ending style of DaS still left me sad, and so I loved:

"I'm all yours baby, you know that," I whispered in her ear.

She nodded and kissed me firmly. "And I, yours. Even after death."

It was a teary moment for me.

I actually had to read the outtake 3 times before I understood the whole Rule # 1. DURRRRR! I completely forgot about Jasper's scars for some reason and his aversion to taking off his tank tops. Mebbe I was just too turned on to remember? hehe )

All in all, it was motherfuckingHOT! Nuff said ) And sweet and tender at the same time )

Bravo!
ahealthydistrust chapter 2 . 9/16/2010
O.O HOLY *runs for cold shower* (p.s. that was effing HOT)
xIt's Time to Burnx chapter 2 . 9/16/2010
I have to admit I was never the biggest fan of demons and sinners, mainly due to the amount of drama and the whole Edward and Alice thing, which I was literally yelling at my computer about as if it could somehow stop it lol.

But I did enjoy it, honestly, and this outtake was very hot, kinksper is one lucky fucker! Lol.

A quick note on the serious business from the blog, if people do complain that you’re not updating you should ignore them, there are more important things out there than fan fiction and sometimes real life does have to take centre stage, you’ve always been reliable with updates and it’s clear you’re not just going to abandon the story so take care of your family first, that’s the important thing. xx
MaydayLover1 chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
I loved reading this and demons and sinners. ur an amazing writer. I mean i try to write but ill never compare to wht u do. Just know you can make a living off of one good book
robin27 chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
I made the mistake of reading this right before I went to bed and it pissed me off so bad I couldn't sleep. WTF is wrong with these people. I just am so crazy about Alice and Jasper and go a bit crazy whenever they are messing around with someone else. Plus I get really tired of Eddie's "problems". Good grief man up! Then after I slept about a half an hour I woke back up with a screaming pain in my knee and while I was waiting for it to ease up I got to thinking that I haven't read the story yet and maybe if I read it before the outtakes this might make more sense. So I am going to go try that before I start blitzing you with messages begging you to put Alice and Jasper back together. But it just goes to show that you are doing a good job writing if you can actually cause the reader to be so mad that they are losing sleep. And I so agree with you on the issue of Jasper's hair in New Moon. What the hell were they thinking? It looks like some little old lady's wig landed backwards on his head. And that scene at the end where they are voting, he absolutely looked wrong. Looked like they were trying to make him look like one of the romanians from Breaking Dawn. I haven't seen enough bits of Eclipse to tell how his hair looks in that one yet but it can't be worse can it? Hope not.
PreciousD chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
wow i loved this outtake and i hope there will be a few more of it :) maybe one about bella and edward... at some time ;)

xx Diana
Homegrl aka Amanda chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
OMG this was a good outtake. I don't read slash ever, but this was very good. I prefer to read A/E stuff here than in D&S. The whole Alice and Bella thing was great too. great job
Makkitotosimew chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
Told you before, but I can't not say it in the review - that is the best and most honest disclaimer ever. Fucking wig fail... *shakes head* I can't believe they managed to make KStew look better than ever in (what we've seen of) that movie and yet fucked Jacksper up royally. It's downright sinful. Anywho! I digress...

Query: Is "Wonderland" Bella's nether regions or Edward's? :P

"So how do I say, ‘thanks for fingering me I needed the release to help me sleep,’ without sounding like a total bitch?" You don't. That's what they make Hallmark cards for. :D

"...teaching my best friend how to double click her mouse..." Best euphemism I've read in ages. lol

My freaking iPod knows. It knows. I told K about 100 Monkeys and then Muse and then "Bella's Lullaby", but for the love of Jasper, it's playing Nelly Furtado's "Promiscuous" as Alice undresses for Bella! And now it's T.V. Carpio's cover of "I Want to Hold Your Hand" as Alice is talking about lines she never expected to cross. Fucking ATU. lol And "With A Little Help From My Friends" as Bella gets off. Sweet jesus, this is killin' me. Take pride in the fact that the coincidental hilarity of the music isn't taking my mind off how freaking hot the outtake is. Because if there's one thing it is it's motherfucking hot. Well, technically it's best friend fucking hot, but you know what I mean. Can I borrow Alice? lol

Aw... and now it's sad. Really sad. :( Poor Alice. Poor semi-uninvolved Jasper. Hell, poor Edward, in a way. I ain't sayin' poor Bella though, coz she's all fucking set for this "chapter". JS.
MaleficentKnits chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
no!no!no!no!no!no!no!no!no!no!no!no!no!no!no!no!no!no!no!no!no!

Mal is screaming cause you know what a diehard A&J fan she is but have to say that was one fawkhawt lemon between Alice and Bella! damn! nice, sweeties... very nice.
PrettyFace27 chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
Hey girls, loved the outtake! :D

Especially the slash you got going on. Was really nicely written. (i say nicely, but it was also damn fricken hot too! :D)

Ill admit i did squeel and go ek when she was doing stuff with virginalward.

However this whole outtake has made me really look forward to a time when Edward and Bella can be together.

i love them as characters, despite the fact i might not agree with all of their choices *cough*edward*cough*. And i can't wait to see more of them. Maybe now that Alice and jasper are back together and the story focuses more on them, then we might see a little e and b pov in the outtakes?

The last bit with Edward, i kinda want it to be in DaS, rather than an as an outtake. It really helps with understanding Alice's thought process and makes her dumping of Edward seem less harsh. because its not like he didn't know she was struggling with them two being together, he must have known she wasn't completely over Jasper.

But it also shows us how much genuine concern and love Edward has for Alice. and from the sexy times, clearly he's watched enough porn to not be as naive as he seems! *fans self* steamy!

Yeah so yummy Bella and Alice!

I am quite a slash fan, mainly because they have to be a little more creative in writing smut or that it just varies from the other stuff i have to read.

anyway i think ive said enough.

I love it! and can't wait for the DaS update! :D

Much love x
Goneforever8888 chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
ok, so I was so not going to read that. I have no interest in Edward and Alice, but curiosity got the better of me. I read it, all of it. Now, honestly I wish I skipped the shit with Edward - put you ladies knew I would say something like that.

But Bella and Alice. um...wow! I mean it's a little strange, but that was hot! I give you super props K, hot girl on girl action! I wasn't sure about slash and I liked that but this was technically my first girl on girl - technically. And I'm surprised, more surprised then the slash that it was hot.

awesome job!

The end...ugh. You know how I feel about that, but for some reason the whole sentence, "I'm sorry", little did he know I wasn't apologizing to him (don't know if thats exactly what she said but you get it) Just stuck with me - maybe because I am so not for Edward and Alice, like at all.

I would prefer she has Bella come over almost every night and they have repeat performances then get with Ed. Just sayin!

Anyway - loved it ladies! Hot, hot, hot! Proud of you! :D

Love,

Jess
Frust-sheep chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
First I thought, hm should I read a non canon ff? *lol* Because honestly in the Twi fandom non canon is not so my taste, BUT then I thought this is a outtake for D&S and it wrote ALSPER...so this can not be bad. *lol* So of course I could not resist and had to read it.

And OMG would I slap myself, if I had not read it. This was a so wonderful outtake and I had so to sniffle, when Jasper was mentioned and I have to say he was really fantastic included. Especially the last lines were gorgeous. *aww* Anyway this was just brilliant and awesome written again. I love it and I would really hate it, if I had miss this. :)

I read this already yesterday and put it on my fav list, but was too tired to review, so I reviewed now. ;)
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