|Reviews for Devil's Angel|
| bellasunderstudy1 chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
Ah, where to start? Of course I loved the chapter. It's an amazing start to a story that had me by the heart strings and motorcycle boot straps from the outset of the O/S.
I'm very interested in knowing what happened that no one will forget. What's he hiding from everyone and why doesn't he 'do locals' because of something that he obviously has done or feels that he is responsible for. I'm wondering does it have something to do with his parents? I'm loving that it's a heading in a CSI type direction. I love that show and I love the mystery aspect of this story. Peeling away the layers and understanding the character and the story make a story great. And you are one of the best at building a story.
Can't wait to see where you're taking us on this ride.
| L-Anne Cullen chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
I really like this! I'm very interested to know what people should forget! Poor Edward can never find someone that likes him for him and not his bank account! I can't wait to see how he meets Bella. I bet she knows NOTHING about him!
| Amber Energi chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
I am so stoked that you are expanding the oneshot w/outtakes into a full story. I actually have been thinking about this story a lot lately and wondering what was going to be done with it. I am seriously thrilled that this will be your new project. I loved HOFY, but I am really looking forward to getting to know bikeward and this Bella.
I like the new start to the story. It gives us more insight to Edward as a character.
| Viola Cornuta chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
intriguing re-working of some serious hotness, so I follow where you lead!
| phoebelicious chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
I was SO excited to see this story in my inbox tonight. I loved the original one-shot and can't wait to see where a full length story takes us. After that first chapter, I am so well and truly hooked.
| beate73 chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
*sigh* So many questions, so many theories, so excited to see how you spin this! And what is it he wants people to forget? I know, I know - you're not telling yet... Like I said, so many theories, can't wait to see if I'm on target or out of my mind. :)
| prassacut chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
I love it! Thanks so much for writting another story! I think I'm a little in love with you right now... lol
Ah a fic with mystery and unanswered questions, you know how to talk to a girl!
| babylou23 chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
can't beat a good mystery with some lemons, this story is very addictive already which is normally hard to pool off but you have. love bikerward and can't wait for the next chapter.
| ipreferbrunettes chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
I'm really looking forward to reading your new story. The first chapter was great and you were right - so many questions that need to be answered! Can't wait to find out.
| Miss Baby chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
I love it so far but that's no surprise since I've loved all of your stories. I'm wondering where Edward's notoriety in Malibu comes from. I take it his bad-boy status isn't just something that comes with the bike and the jacket. Something bad must have happened at some point. I can't wait to read more of this.
| rachel-angwin chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
oo nice totally wanna find out wht happened! cant wait for ore great opener thanks rachel xx
| oneiros lykos chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
I'm curious about his past that everyone seems to know about but only three people know the real Edward.
| twiXlite chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
Can't wait to see what happens :D
| the real teacher chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
great start! looking forward to uncovering the mystery!
| pippapear chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
Thanks for the wussperv heads up! ;) LOL!
This chapter was quite different to how I remember the one-shot. . I am almost torn in whether to reread the oneshot as I read it so long ago or to let myself just refresh through the new take from you as you unfold this story. . .
I really am intrigued by what he is trying to forget - by what he wants others to forget - what generates his "No Locals" stance. . .
Very very very intrigued...
Thanks for this chapter.
I am so ruddy thrilled that you are developing & doing this story... BikerWard, I imagine, has quite the story to tell . . .