|Reviews for Pokemon: Red vs Leaf|
| SomtinWeAsianGot chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
Um... is it even possible for Rattata to learn flame wheel...? What about Charmander's Dragon Rage? Charmander cannot learn Dragon Rage unless you teach it by TM. And I don't think Air Slash existed in Gen 1... also, it isn't possible to poison a poison type (because Beedrill is a dual bug/poison type) in Pokemon... if my facts are wrong then don't mind this review.
Otherwise, this story was good. I think you fully described what the battle would look like in the anime. Lots of detail put into the story... wait, were you basing this story off the anime?
| Latin Echidna chapter 13 . 12/25/2010
Don't see much Red x Leaf finally I find one that is good so hope you make more of this couple but do make separate paragraphs.
| Heatman1991 chapter 13 . 11/28/2009
Finally, someone wrote a Leaf/Red story. I found this one to be well written. But i found this almost hard to read since u didn't put line spaces every. But really, this is a great story overall, i really do hope that u work on the Gold vs. Kris story soon.
Good luck dude, it takes time and effort to make a good story, but it should be easy, u already made one, just gotta do it again.
| Zugi chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
my only problem is that they are too skilled for trainers this early into the story. they aren't perfect yet, and you need to kind of show that.
| Mr-Paper-Luigi-66 chapter 7 . 10/6/2009
A great chapter! Keep up the good work!
| Mr-Paper-Luigi-66 chapter 4 . 10/1/2009
It's a very good story. I like Zapdos and Pidgeotto, they speak the truth.
| Frabulator chapter 3 . 9/30/2009
I REALLY like it! I think it moves a little fast, but other than that it's great! Please update soon :D
| Augustine May chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
This is off to a gret start. It would be a bit easier to read if you indented at the begginning of the paragraphs, though. Can't wait to read more!