Reviews for Moments at Gol
Guest chapter 6 . 2/17/2022
You have great talent in drawing forth, fleshing out the characters of Star Trek and their interactions with each other.
" 'Your meditation is vital, and I have disturbed it too long,' he said, keeping his tone level and void of feeling. 'I must take my leave.' "
I relate this portion of Sarek to Spock to my own interaction with my father.
He lived several states away from us, his grown children. We all lived with our spouses and children within 60 miles of each other. He would drive out once a year but wouldn't call until he arrived. He'd call and say, "I'll be there in 15 minutes." because he didn't want us to make a fuss and big preparation for his arrival. We'd have a good visit for maybe a half hour or so. Then he'd look at his watch and say, "well, it's time for me to go." He explained once that he didn't want to stay past his welcome, even though we reassured him that he couldn't.
He went to each child's house this way, getting the personal attention and updates of children, their spouses, and grandchildren.
Then he'd invite all out to dinner, usually a buffet.
He was a private person, but he made the effort to connect to his family as well as he was able.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/17/2022
"like the custodian of a huge library whose keys had been jumbled and mixed until he could open none of the rooms."
Loved this analogy.
Great writing.
Sarah vIHtaHbe chapter 1 . 7/7/2020
Wow, I loved this! My favourite part would have to be the acknowledgment of the extremely close t'hy'la bond between Kirk and Spock that was brotherly and not romantic.
I also loved the deep, realistic chatacterization given to so many of these characters, and the way you portrayed the slowly healing and remembering Spock.
Sally chapter 1 . 9/21/2019
Very good story!
Deneb chapter 11 . 2/4/2016
I thoroughly enjoyed these moments. You nailed it.
geriatricfool chapter 9 . 11/8/2015
This was quite quite beautiful. So moving.
Guest chapter 11 . 6/9/2015
Excellent. I wish fal-tor-pan had been available for Leonard Nimoy so we could have kept him longer.
Doni chapter 11 . 3/18/2015
A very fitting ending as it is also another beginning. Well done.
Heather Snow chapter 11 . 3/2/2015
Interesting perspectives. You portrayed how lost Spock is very well.
geriatricfool chapter 11 . 3/1/2015
Thank you for concluding this series. I love it, and this ending was appropriate and poignant. All the more so now.
celticmusebooks chapter 11 . 2/28/2015
Wonderful ending, great story.
Obsessive66 chapter 11 . 2/28/2015
Thoroughly enjoyable, thank you.
Guest chapter 10 . 11/17/2014
Very interesting snapshots.
Doni chapter 10 . 9/29/2014
Lovely work.
Minecraft Guardiansaiyan chapter 3 . 9/29/2014
Damn right! Golden trio FTW!
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