Reviews for The Darkness Within
RaidenUzumaki14 chapter 21 . 6/29
absolutely brilliant. you need to write a navel series. you re way better than the authors of twilight and 50 shades of grey.
heredia chapter 12 . 3/27
bad that mayu spared this creature he surely would pick up another victim
crankshaft7 chapter 21 . 3/3
I'm a sucker for a happy ending and Elfen Lied really needed one. Bravo
crankshaft7 chapter 20 . 3/3
I kind of thought that Knots and Lucy as well as the rest of the residents of the kaede house would take him in and out him on track to becoming human again like before he was taken by Kakuzawa. But he in a way learned what love is and showed it by taking the blame. Now how he knew to do that was another matter altogether. He had no knowledge of law or what a policeman is. Yet he perceived the problem and drew up such a complex line of thought and came to a conclusion that efficiently and thourally solved both problems he could define and as many and could possibly arrise? is That perhaps a bit to far a stretch? However sometimes in real life as well as fiction things just fall into place and shouldn't be poked at to much as I just have. Lol. Great story
crankshaft7 chapter 17 . 3/3
To quote my favorite movie V for vendetta (which incidentally was also a manga or graphic novel as it was called) "every actiion has an equal and opposing reaction, what they did to me was monstrous. And they created a monster". I like this twist in the story.
crankshaft7 chapter 15 . 3/3
Really good end for the truely evil villain of this story. You should definitely read the manga and you will be pleasantly suprised. It's a really good read and offers a lot of insight to thing that were poorly explained or not explained at all in the anime.
crankshaft7 chapter 2 . 3/1
Yea the M rating might be called for I'd say more for Lucy's er uh Kaede's sadistic enjoyment of all the carnage. Pretty dark stuff (ain't it great). I like the story so far.
DicloniusAngel chapter 13 . 10/26/2014
BRUTALITY. My kinda story.
Guest chapter 13 . 7/6/2014
She should do this to nozomi father, not kill him but toture him, for nozomi sake
Guest chapter 13 . 7/6/2014
I fucking love this
Guest chapter 13 . 6/11/2014
I want bando to kill them
ANON chapter 21 . 1/7/2014
FINALLY elfin lied gets the happy ending it deserves seriously you should send this into the makers of the series to see if they'll revamp it with your ending it was very in character and believe able I was almost in tears at the end
JediMasterBianca chapter 21 . 5/22/2013
Wow... Awesome story..
COMPLETELY WORTHY OF MY APPRECIATION!
kilah234 chapter 13 . 4/27/2013
Epic. (v)
XxNeo-ChanxX chapter 21 . 4/17/2013
dude this is awsome Kenshin is a total badass he went out like a boss i feal kinda bad for him but still that dude is a badass im puting him on the badass hall of fame any way good job man awsome fic
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