|Reviews for Missing Moment From Once and Future Queen|
| LoveCanConquerAll chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
cute...but just two things
1. a bit short (add more detail, but i know it is hard making it long. it looks long on Mcrosft Word but then when you upload it, it is really short)
2. cute dialogue, but i think it is a bit unrealistic that he has only just kissed her once, and is talking about marraige already. maybe say it is after Queen of Hearts or something like that.
Good story. Keep writing as you are one amazing writer.
Princess Aryana of Camelot
| Rolletti chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
Aw how sweet and lovely is this! (sigh) Thanks for sharing this beautiful story.
| kittyreilly chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
Oh my god! That is one of the cutest things ever! You should totally add to this - I wanna see what happens next! :)