Reviews for Time Loop
Guest chapter 8 . 5/23
Oh lord, a pervert with access to the power of intangability.
AnAncientBard chapter 2 . 3/1/2014
Wasn't this once two separate story's?
10/10
One of the best.
Ashen Author chapter 1 . 2/15/2014
I love this, especially the little add on about how dangerous Aizen is.
solitare chapter 8 . 1/21/2013
How about Sein, Happosai, and Hayate? Maybe Jiraiya too?
jgkitarel chapter 7 . 11/16/2012
"On the other hand, I wonder what Signum or Reinforce Ein would be like if I doped them up on caffeine and sugar." Ranma muttered to himself.

Considering that Ranma's mix would be like a cocktail of high end cocaine and meth? Would be amusing to see, just keep them away from any inhabited start systems while they work it out of their systems.
jgkitarel chapter 8 . 10/9/2012
To be honest, the idea behind this fic is interesting, and it seems to be a means of a personal redemption for Ranma, with all he has been through and done. The fact that he now has a looping family, along with daughters who call him their father has an interesting effect on his psyche, which would explain why he is also both highly protective of them and so demanding of them when he trains them.

For the girls, they get a father, brother, lover, mentor and friend all in one, depending on their own personal needs, all while they deal with Nerima.

Still, the main focus here, I think, is that Ranma is doing something many others would have a hard time believing. He gets a family, a true family for himself, which is a pleasant change, but more importantly, he is finally letting go of a past he barely remembers, letting go of his pain and letting go of his loss. Even if they don't always remain together, he now has a family that will be with him. He will have his daughters, sisters, students, friends and so on, who will be there for him whenever they meet again.
jgkitarel chapter 2 . 10/9/2012
Wait... Deed... modified Starlight Breaker... Kodachi Befriended... buh?!

*initializing cranial reboot*
Guest chapter 8 . 8/13/2012
where's chapter 9?will sein become happosai's student of pervy?(:P)
dogbertcarroll chapter 8 . 5/3/2012
Great ending.
Youko Rayah chapter 8 . 3/4/2011
*reads the last section of this chapter*

ok... time to sing the Doom song I think. cause this? will not end well *giggle*

lovely fic hon, can't wait for more!
The 17th Immortal chapter 8 . 2/23/2011
That girl with the big dog: please tell me that's not who I think it is.

Or better yet, please tell me the boy she likes (and/or his "nii-san") is involved in the loops…
jaredhimself31 chapter 8 . 12/23/2010
This is a great story, despite the small number of reviews overall, I have greatly enjoyed it so far. I wish more people would write about the multiversal timeloops. Innortal hasn't updated any of his work in...9 months I thinks, so it was a plesant surprise to come across this excellent piece of crossover literature.
Hiryo chapter 8 . 9/20/2010
Again a wonderful story and I could enjoy it to the end

OMG Happosai and her XD XD XD poor gals in the future. XD

Please update soon!
Bobboky chapter 8 . 9/17/2010
nice work
CJNyfalt chapter 8 . 9/16/2010
Great chapter. The only thing that I was having problem understanding is the pat head and rub belly stuff, that worked on first try without effort.

Looking forward to seeing more.
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