|Reviews for Fallen|
| Mandalore Requiem chapter 2 . 2/21/2013
I'd re-rate this story to Mature instead of Teen if I was you give the mature... activities.
| nicklaura chapter 3 . 11/14/2012
That was a pretty good story! I really gasped when I read that her wings we're gone. Glad she got them back! I really liked that the people at the mission accepted her even after her wings came back. That put a smile on my face. Thus story fills that little hole where she wasn't part of the league quite nicely.
| moonlit notebook chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
I enjoyed this literary work very greatly. If you take out the intimate parts of Shayera's and Keri's relationship I would say that it is the best fanfiction I have ever read. I hope to read more of your works in the near future. I sincerely thank you for taking the time to spin such a spool of gold.
| deafening-silence-215 chapter 3 . 12/12/2009
the best justice league fanfic i have ever read. pure genius.
| HawkAngel XD chapter 3 . 11/13/2009
such amazing work!
| IVIaedhros chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
Fascinating...shame it seems to be so short.
| Lit. Metalhead chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
Very nice writing.
| kitkat113 chapter 3 . 11/5/2009
This was a great story. Very well done. I've been wanting to read a story involving Shayera's time apart from the league. The subtle way you integrated events from actual episodes worked well with the plot and gave it a good sense of time within the universe with out to much effort being spent retelling JLU episodes. I would be very interested in reading a post destroyer story centering around Shayera if you ever have the desire to write it.
| HarimaHige chapter 3 . 10/24/2009
great chapter. but i would like to see more bruce/shayera moments. Hope you update soon.
| BladeMaster357 chapter 3 . 10/23/2009
Aww, the story finished a lot sooner than I hoped. Good story though, even if the ending seemed a bit rushed and anticlimactic. Hope to read something else in the future. _
| BladeMaster357 chapter 2 . 10/6/2009
I really like what you've done with this story so far. Though I really feel for the pain Shayera is put through. Nearly losing her wings for good and her sense of self, to the tragic death of her close friend/lover. Please update again soon!
| HarimaHige chapter 2 . 10/2/2009
a lot of tragedy for Shay. Good chapter.
| Midnight6 chapter 2 . 10/1/2009
Great. Including the crown prince of crime in your story makes me want to pick up Batman Arkham Asylum even more now. And I bet I got a few stares from not having picked it up already.
Back to the story, it was interesting seeing the result of a rebuilt life, but I was somewhat surprised you included a fatality (I'm purposefully staying vague, maybe too much so). I guess th4e surprise came from how it seemed almost... offhanded. "oh, and this one died". I'm not trying to sound negative, but it did hit me kinda out of the blue. That and I'm notorious about taking it hard when anyone, even secondary characters, are killed off, be it in fics or the actual tv series, western or anime. That's reflected in one of my own fics now that I think about it. But still, I enjoyed reading this. And about my earlier gripe, I'm taking comfort in thinking that you have something planned out for how this will go.
| darke wulf chapter 2 . 9/30/2009
His expression fell as his hand came out empty, and he looked over at Batman who held up one gloved hand, with four, small yellow spheres in his palm. “Looking for these?”
“Sometimes,” Joker swore as he was cuffed. “You are no fun. No fun at all,” he protested as he was dragged away for yet another session at Arkham.
Loved it! I really like the way you are characterizing Batman in this. Still dark and brooding, but loyal to his friends and a bit more open to those he trusts...not so deliberately beligerant as many write him.
The interaction between he and Shayera is also very well done.
| HarimaHige chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
well writen story. very interesting so far. Paring sounds great. please continue.