It was so weird because their are brothers but it was also so good. I really enjoy it.

Awwwwwww I LOOOOOOVED it! ;3; 3

Thanks for writing and sharing 3

this is the most brotherliest sasunarusasu i ever read honestly

i got jealous a lot of times with how their relationship going on,especially as gamers and weebs.
the way they do anything for sake of the game was so unbelievable risky! got sent to principal office for almost every week is so... damn XD

and i can't believe that sasuke can be so dangerous when he's become fundanshi and gay at the same time lmfao! the fact that he saw nori and jun as himself and naruto in yaoi universe is kinda big problem if naruto didn't have the same curiosity like him XD
even me,as fujoshi,has my own funny excuse for take a liking to BL tho. like...
"i watch/read yaoi in the name of science/biology"
and my motto as fujo is "better watch than do 'it' in the real life"

and let's not forget about those jealousy crap...
goddammit,those jealousy...!

somehow,i can feel what naruto and sasuke feel at that moment; mine is like combination of them
i have a twin,a bit older than me; only different 2 minutes before my birthday
she's somehow smarter than me,and has more friends than me till that u can call her group as a pack of wolves.
meanwhile,i'm only have 1 or 2 closest friends as my pack; the others are just a classmates,no more no less. which usually i call myself a lone fox

well... u see..
wolflives in large pack,good at socializing
foxlives in very small pack,and that pack won't last long till each of the pack members went to their separate ways

and that last chapter tho...
such a BIG disappointment...
as long as i can tell after reading the whole damn story before the bonus chapter,that smutt supposed to be sasunaru(at 1st,since this was sasunarusasu). since the beginning sasuke is the older brother here. he read nori/jun(SN) fanfictions most of the time; he's the 1 who want to starts 'everythingand hell,he even said to himself that he's that kind of protective and possessive older brother to naruto just like what i imagine(wanted)...
but unfortunately,the last chapter is kinda ruined(to my opinion) thanks to the smutt

Loved this fic! It was adorable and a bit awkward with Sasuke and naruto's sexual tension. Loved how close they were. And the ending bit with Kakashi was priceless.

Lovely, just lovely

That was awesome! I liked the structure of your story, even if sometimes I wanted to go back to present faster. I don't know if you're into video games but I like the attention given to this part, and it was much more belieable, in the sense the reader was well immersed in your story. I was quite surprised by the beginning, I was not expecting at all the video game context or the goal of their fights, so you got me into your story pretty fast. I like also how you're telling their past and how they connected to each other, which, by the way, makes it logical to have the story really focused on these two and that we finally don't see so much of secondary characters (I mean the other students). One of the details I loved is their point of view on who should bottom first, that was, you know, half cute half deep feeling/emotional, linked to their past and their personalities. Love how it turns out too. Poor Kakashi, fully traumatised by his adopted son's fanfiction, hahaha! Thank you for sharing it!

Am dead.

Dear Sasuke (because I know it's you) please don't post anything like this again. Thanks to this, I will have nightmares about you two for the rest of my life. Also, tell Naruto that he has a doctor's appointment next Monday. -Kakashi

they're arguing for the bottom position.. that's a first xD

I really loved this. It was an interesting twist on their relationship that I've never really seen before. It should have been weird but it wasn't because it was them. And they were so cute with their show and their video games. I'm glad their show had a good ending & I love their future plans regarding that. And Kakashi was so sweet too! I loved when they all roasted marshmallows together. Such an adorable family moment.

Very good! I love it!

Tbh I'm still laughing because if Kakashi found Sasuke's fanfiction, he would have had to read it from the start - BEFORE he knew that Sasuke was the author.
Heh.
What a perv.

This whole story was amazing, incredible. I love how their relationship developed, their friendship and then more, it was awesome. I love how they bond about games and stuff, and well, I loved this story so, so much! And the last chapter, with Kakashi's comment, omg that was perfect hahaha.
Bye :D

Reading this fic after the horrible ending to the actual Naruto manga, I wondered how you would end Ninja Chronicles, your fanfiction parallel to the original series. What kind of ending did you predict for Naruto/Ninja Chronicles back in 2009? It was a bit wistful to see that you imagined a positive, open ending that bridged the gap into a new series. In reality, what we got was completely the opposite.

Knowing how things actually turn out, it made me wonder how this fic's Naruto and Sasuke would have reacted if Jun and Nori got the terrible ending that the real Naruto and Sasuke got. Would it have tarnished their memories of bonding over Ninja Chronicles? Would they have been hurt to see characters they identified with turn into people they didn't like? Would it have thrown them into even more turmoil over the fate of their own real life bond? Naruto and Sasuke were more or less separated, and that was the greatest fear that this Naruto and Sasuke had, that their bond might not last. Watching fandom struggle with all of this for the past year, it makes me curious how this Naruto and Sasuke would have struggled with it as well, especially since they were so personally invested, even more than the average fan.

Alas, even if Naruto didn't end on a positive note and the corrupt system was never fixed, at least Ninja Chronicles ended nicely out here in fanfiction land. And this Naruto and Sasuke can always get their happy ending. :)

I loved this sooooo much!
Job well done.
Or, should I say 'game well played'.
*snickers*
I crack myself up.
But seriously, I LOVED this.