Reviews for Flawless |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I should know better than to read your stuff late at night x-x I'm anticipating nightmares... Btw, it was brilliant as always |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perfectly written, no flaws yeah? This is flawless! I love tis fic! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice im good with a needle too... |
![]() ![]() ![]() i cried reading this, very very powerful, sora...i can for sure see that of him stealing people from others... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Marry me? O_O |
![]() ![]() ![]() 0.0 ... um i dont know wat to say it... it was... kinda crazy |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't stop reading your stories XD I swear, I was only looking for ONE horror fic, and I came across your profile. And now, I must go read more :D Great job! Still lovin' the crazy Roxas! ~Romie |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy fuck, crazy Roxas! DX I'm surprised I only had to turn away from this once - when Roxas was cutting off Axel's eyelids. It reminded me of a music video for a Korn song that I just can't look at, though I've only watched it once. I can't even listen to that song without feeling sick. Ehhhhh... I feel kinda sick now, actually. But it's mostly just a 'oh god that's awful' feeling and a nauseous headache. And, honestly, if there were any mistakes I really didn't notice. Too wrapped up in this fic. I don't think I'll ever be able to forget this. It was just amazing. With big hearts and exploding bits of love, Keade |
![]() ![]() I f-ing hearts it! Oh my Stars! It's amazing! Awesome job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am forever disturbed.. But it was very good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() you write a mean psychopath XD really good. really gory. awesome ~Evelynn |
![]() ![]() ![]() I must say this was lovely. I can definitely see some of the SAW influence in it, but you threw in a lot of originality as well [I actually had a flashback to the Skeleton Key due to all the stitching though]. And I wouldn't say that this wasn't gory enough, the gore was properly measured to go with Roxas' growing insanity. The ending was unexpected honestly, I was going with the thought that Roxas would kill both Sora and Axel before committing suicide himself. Who knew regret would drive him to try and save Axel...I admit that I do feel bad for Roxas in the strangest of ways, not to say that I hold no sympathy for Axel and Sora, no no, cheating has a way of getting back at people on its own, without the mutilations Roxas put them through. Who know someone could survive something like that, but I can see why Axel wouldn't mind dying after all he'd been through. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sewing them together... why didn't I think of that.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! This was amazing! I love it so much! When Roxas started to go insane I started to read out loud and it was so fun to be insane! God im so weird! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() great job, yea this is really really gory. you should do another one, this is great. |