Reviews for Untouched
keepsakeatlas chapter 1 . 6/11/2018
Tuesday's-Here chapter 1 . 8/30/2016
This was your first lemon? Well let me just say it was hot, hot, hot! I've heard that it can be embarrassing to write lemons, I would imagine the kinkier and more hardcore scenes can be more difficult. If that is true I think you did a good job! A nice one-shot with a nice lemon, just what we all need! Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us, and good for you persevering through and finishing!
blurryfaceimagines chapter 1 . 9/3/2014
Woa..your first smut? ? Hellll! It wss great...
Though you seemed to have repeated some phrases a lot
Shadowfey913 chapter 1 . 7/8/2014
This story is fantastic! Thank you so much for sharing it.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/7/2014
This was the first lemon you've ever written? Then congratulations. It was very good.
Starriecat chapter 1 . 9/17/2013
YUM that was HOT!
inouekurosaki26 chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
hey i really like it the one-shot. The end make me laught a lot, poor sasuke, but hey! he have the best sex in his life hahahahaha i really love a some, and dominant Naruto. He look so sexy like that.

Any way...ummmm i want to know if i can do the traslation to spanish. If you let me, please send me a PM

Mammy992 chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
that was one amazing lemon ;)
LezBot chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
Damn! This was hotter than hell! I loved it. *I wonder if its normal for a lesbian to love a story like this so much?* Ha like I care! This story was great I will definitely be back to read this again.
itsmegonzo chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
This was defff. a GREAT lemon it's one of the best I've ever read and I've read A LOT lol. :) I loved the story and everything about it! :)
schakar chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
ok thatt was so good hmmm naughty!
itsjustme chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
so thats why sasuke is always messin with naruto...
Kanaxmochi chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
Haha poor sasuke! /:3 but he liked it. This was an awesome story and f*** suiguestu (or how ever you spell his name -.-)
LyRiCho chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
Ahahaha... Seriously it was hawt! Simply simply hawt! XD hehehehehehhehehehe
Treasure Family chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
I love it. Great job.
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