I really liked this chapter, you truly are an amazing writer. The Cartman and Henrietta interaction made me laugh, it was great. Glad it's still going to be a Kyman story though. _

this story is amazingG

but the only thing i didnt agree with was the ponytailL

i agree erietta is a great odd coupleE

There were alot of ideas that made me cringe at first (like Cartman with a ponytail and OC's), but I decided that I would trust you. Kyle in Chains was amazing. And you are an amazing writer.

So yes. I'm excited for this. It's beyond words.

xNae'Ka

Oh yay. Your new story is really fascinating with the new style, characters and of course the ratings...Rated T! I know this story is going to be good as "Kyle in Chains", I know it is update soon!

Aww! I love the descriptiveness. Usually, I tend to stray away from Kyman, but you got me interested. I hope that since you already have most if it written, you'll post again soon!

So good! I'm hooked. The only thing I didn't really like was the ponytail, but that's just me. I'm excited to read the rest.

Oh I'm so happy that you're writing a new one (and keeping to Kyle in Chains)!

Your writing isn't as crappy as you make it out to be (sadly enough for you!) and I just can't wait until you get deeper into the plot XD

I'm so excited about this new story, I love it already! Can't wait to see more of it. :]

Hmm... seems interesting.

I shall read it.

x3

Wow, i'm really liking this idea x3

Haha, Evers is 'super cool'. I mostly like Kyle, because he's as badass as Cartman. This is going to be an interesting story. UPDATE. XD

Question: Is Tim Evers based off of Edward French from Apt Pupil? Honestly, Tim's introduction was highly reminiscent of said story. Heh.

Good start, though. Never thought of Cartman as ever having a ponytail, so that's pretty unique.

justT foundD thisS storyY !

wow its so awsum but i wish it was written in the first person... coz then i know how theyre feeling ... but ya no its good to no u cn write in all styles very cool

Oh, much love for the first chapter :) It seems like this is going to be a lot more light-hearted than 'Kyle in Chains', which suits my mood perfectly right now, so thank you! Don't worry about the writing style - I know it's tricky switching perspectives but it seemed fine to me. (Although I may be biased: I prefer third-person to first-person narration anyway, for the most part...).

Loved the argument/fight in this too - it's so refreshing to read a fic where Kyle's acting like his usual aggressive self rather than the overly-sweet boy that so many people write. Can't wait for the next update!

~Tash