|Reviews for The Intervention Job|
| Otter chapter 28 . 7/23
Yay, things turned out ok with Sophie! The thing with each of them learning something from the others is awesome, I wondered what hardison would teach them. And of course it was WoW. Poor Eliot, little, low level Eliot. I laughed at a lot of his complaints. Thank you for writing this story!
| Otter chapter 27 . 7/23
Last 2 chapters :( I've been putting it off cause I didn't want it to end. I love this story way too much. In saying that, this chapter? Incredible. And look out Sophie! Here comes stepford-wife-Parker.
| Otter chapter 26 . 7/18
I really like how slow and gentle Elliot forces himself to be for hardison, to make this as easy and nice for all of them as possible. He's sweet when he wants to be. This chapter! This freaking chapter! Is so. Damn. Good! Well done!
| Otter chapter 25 . 7/18
Ahhhjjjjjjjkk! That's not a bad place to cut off because it makes sense to start a new chapter with even more glorious smut and I'm so happy I'm bouncing. Yay for sexy Dom Parker and I loved the giggly, im-in-trouble, run-around-the-house Parker 3 I find it interesting that hardison enjoyed the spanking, poor him getting tied up on the bed and only able to watch. I did laugh that he actually paid Parker to spank Eliot. So excited for the next chapter!
| Otter chapter 24 . 7/18
I'm going to apologize in advance cause this comment is going to get looong (there's so much I wanna talk about)
Elliot being freaked out by the word 'marriage' strikes me as very normal, at least for his character, what with Aimee and all.
And I understand it when more than one character has a bad day on the same day. (It just, makes a lot of sense to me and seems more realistic that way). And oh dear, Elliot started flirting with that woman and I just felt so bad for him, knowing the guilt was going to smack him one and then it did. And using the marriage-freak-out as an excuse is terrible Elliot, no. Bad Elliot.
I was amused too, like hardison, by Elliot's pain. I love Parker's weirdness sometimes. The 'marking her territory' bit made me laugh :) and he does have sex eyes! I noticed it too! :D
I loved hardison's metaphorical 'pissing on Eliot' scene cause a) kinky bar kissing and b) he was a little angry, and angry hardison is definitely my jam. I am a little sad they outted Elliot in that bar though. This chapter was full of interesting things :)
| Otter chapter 23 . 7/18
Damnit Sophie! I just wanna hug all of them but especially Parker. And Elliot. It feels like it's Elliot's turn to have a little freak out. This story is so good, I can't tell you enough how much I'm enjoying reading it :)
| Otter chapter 22 . 7/18
Oh damn. That went so much worse than I thought it would. Fuck, Sophie, do you get it your 'helping' is a problem too? Oooh they should hold an intervention for her interventions :) (sorry, I love Sophie, I do) but she hurt Parker. And that's so not ok. I hope Parker is ok :/ even nate was disappointed in her. Great chapter!
| Otter chapter 21 . 7/18
I wouldn't be surprised honestly if Sophie had planted something. But more I'm more worried about that cliffhanger. The talk in the bath was sweet and good and wholesome. It was a relationship talk and I really like seeing them in stories because it fills out the characters, makes them bright and vivid and colourful. I worry for Parker and her post though. Another excellent chapter :)
| Otter chapter 20 . 7/18
5 days. Its only been 5 days Sophie, chill. Leave your little pet project on the back burner and go buy some shoes or something. An interesting chapter, I really enjoyed the start, wish I could say I enjoy Sophie but she kinda just annoys me mostly (in this story at least, which is fine cause it works for the plot) I like how she's damn tenacious though. Good chapter!
| Otter chapter 19 . 7/18
Thank you for making a little fun of porn videos titles. They really are funny sometimes. This was a really cute chapter and I giggled a few times at hardison's moments of everything funny.
| Otter chapter 18 . 7/18
I love how everything is the same, hardison is dealing with WoW and Eliot is making them all breakfast and Parker is asking awkward questions. It's so...normal and I love it. Really enjoyed this chapter :)
| Otter chapter 17 . 7/17
I giggled at the thought of Elliot actually punching someone for hardison, and straight up being asked not to punch anyone. I loved the kisses between hardison and Eliot at the start and the ending! Omg the ending was perfect and I'm so happy they are all together :)
| Otter chapter 16 . 7/17
*extremely happy screaming* Fuck I love poly ships so much. Lol Elliot really needed to know who was paying that bad? And a happy Parker is the best, she makes everyone else happy too :) glad they sorted out the cuts on her legs asks I find it really cute that they had this conversation in the bathroom, Parker sitting on the toilet lid and the boys kneeling down beside her. So excited for the next chapter now! Also - yay Halloween!
| Otter chapter 15 . 7/17
I'm literally screaming at my phone right now. Because yay! Yay the beginnings of ot3 but noooo Elliot wants to run away from it. Come on Eliot, don't you think it would be the best way to spite Sophie? Oh man! He's supposed to deal with hardison and Parker for 2 WEEKS - I don't know if they'll all last that long. Also, that fight/Parker breakdown had me on the verge of tears and wanting to hug Parker better.
| Otter chapter 14 . 7/17
Asdfghjkl! Ahhhhhh, so close yet so far from ot3 happening. So many hurt feelings and so many drunk moments that make me so happy and sad at the same time.