Reviews for Hollow
astrum-faith chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
I couldn't be more proud that your first Heroes fic was Elle-centric. *squee* She's my favourite character, but she is also notoriously difficult to write - we all know how screwed-up she is... I really liked how you wrote her, though. The lost little girl who never quite grew up past that point where we're blinded to our parents' faults, where they're the most wonderful people in the world, however terrible they are...

I particularly liked the line 'Things broke that night' - I'm not quite certain why, exactly, that one line stands out for me so far above the others, especially since I enjoyed the entire story, but I suppose it's the bluntness which is mildly reminiscent of Elle... Am I reading too much into this? Probably. Nevertheless, I did love this. Please continue with the Heroes fics, since you're clearly good at it. *smile*
BloomingSparrow chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
For your first time into the heroes fandom, that was amazing!
Hiya chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
Wow! Talk about getting into a very twisted head. I loved the style used. Good gamble.