|Reviews for Sickly Sweet|
| MoonlightWolf.SunshineFox chapter 27 . 5/24
this is... actually, the 2nd of the worse cliff hanger I ever seen/read
I mean like... BRUHH WHY'D U STOPPED UPDATING?!
I'm never thought that today's the 1st time I'm going to beg for u to not to abandon this story, especially when u stopped updating just right when the conflict is about to reach it's climax
but then, yet again... I also don't want to see ciel forced to live with madam red after the whole event is done
anyway, idk why but Claude is usually the last person I want to see to have a conversation with Ciel. but after reading chapter 16, I become less emotional with Claude than with madam red although she's become sebastian's ally to bring ciel back
I mean, really? I expect Claude to molest ciel in no time in less than 3 minutes I swear. but Claude having no interest with Ciel's lil ass was really2 had catch me off guard:v
and I prefer him this way
btw, when I found out that u separate the lemons from this fanfic, u had me upset at that moment. cuz I ever read a certain Kuro fanfic where every lemos are being cencored /cutted from fanfic and those lemons are nowhere to be found...
it's traumatizing, I'll tell uI also wonder if there's any bonus chapter where it's all about sebastian taking care of 8 yrs old little ciel... like seriously, the time skip between the prologue and chapter 1 is just makes me unsatisfied TwT
oh and then there's that chapter about Sebastian The Cat...
I think that story is just too cute to be ignored and I really2 going to appreciate it if u write the story:P
bruhh... I think I have an unhealthy obsession with Sebastian as Ciel's 'daddy'(the word is obviously had a double meaning in it :v)
| solarsido chapter 3 . 3/3/2018
To all of those saying that Ciel means sky; Ciel also means HEAVEN
| solarsido chapter 3 . 3/3/2018
NO WHY AM I READING THIS, ISNT THIS PEDOPHILIA
| Shadow Brockwell chapter 27 . 9/4/2017
why don't you continue this story it's brilliant and I need to find out what happens to ciel...Please
| Shadow Brockwell chapter 1 . 8/29/2017
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/10/2017
Ciel means sky...
| grayson4life chapter 2 . 1/26/2017
ciel is sky in french.
I had to ask my french teacher in school
did you know if you switch ciel to ceil it would mean sealing? i find it hilarious!
| blaleblelelel chapter 1 . 12/2/2016
Very interesting! :D
I was hesitant on reading an au story, but that's all there is in this archive, so I decided to give this story a try and I absolutely love your writing style and how the story started off! :D
| RissYuki chapter 27 . 11/2/2016
oh my gassssssssssssssshhhhhhhh completed the fic in just a dayyyyy. where's the nexxxt T.T huhuhuhu update pleaSe!
| blackkitty95 chapter 27 . 10/17/2016
Okay, I have to admit that at first I wasn't so sure about this story. I thought it would be a parody fic or something too fluffy. But it wasn't. There's a lot of angst, and I absolutely love the whole story with Pryce and Ciel's parents.
Another thing I was worried about is the age difference. In the anime/manga Sebastian is a demon, so human morals do not concern him. Plus, it's set in the Victorian era where people got married in an early age (Ciel is already betrothed in the beginning of the anime/manga). However, this story is set in the modern world with no supernatural elements whatsoever. I would have felt a little more comfortable if you had aged Ciel up just a little bit, but I was glad to see that Sebastian realizes that, even though Ciel is a willing participant, this is still a crime. I also appreciate the fact that they don't have sex all the freaking time.
I did notice certain mistakes throughout the story. The name is Meirin, not Maylene. "Ciel" is French for "sky", not "heaven". The staff of the café are Sebastian's employees, not his servants. Another thing: when you use two definitions to describe something, you should use the word "slash", for example ~ guardian - slash - lover ~ instead of "cum" because...well, apart from wrong and nonsense, it's...ahem...naughty.
I'm not trying to say that I didn't enjoy the story. It's just that I personally think that constructive criticism can really make someone better.
I actually absolutely LOVED the story! It took me only two days to finish it and I was so sad when I saw that it's not over yet and you haven't updated it in years. I really hope you haven't given up on it and we might get an ending to it.
| Snowphy chapter 20 . 6/24/2016
OMG I WAN TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT :3
| Starburstphoeni chapter 15 . 6/24/2016
Omg can somebody tell me where are the lemons TTTT I'm anxious to know how Ciel lost lol
| CheesyUnicorn chapter 1 . 1/19/2016
| iceflower333 chapter 4 . 2/22/2015
It's amazing! I love the development of your story! :))
| Aiborburakku chapter 27 . 2/4/2015
I am very curious about Sebastian's mother because the way Sebastian want to call his mother very fishy. It's like Sebastian call his mother to help he to save Ciel but what Sebastian's mother can do or his family can do? Is that Sebastian's family is army or what?...and Sebastian's family photo that Claude gave Ciel have show that Sebastian's family have a cold and stoic face...That what writer write... I AM VERY CURIOSITY RIGHT NOW! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I'M WAITING TILL THE HELL FREZZ...