Reviews for The Lucky Charm
cshorte chapter 2 . 10/13/2009
Great chapter!
Missyok chapter 2 . 10/13/2009
COCKBLOCKERS! I love this story. Spicy Bella, horny Edward and manwhore Jasper! It's a trifecta! MORE PLEASE!
JayyeCullen-VampiresxTwilight chapter 2 . 10/13/2009
how cute.
Boston Blondie chapter 2 . 10/13/2009
ok so my husband works the park. based on the stories I've heard (and believe me, he comes home with ALOT) you are dead on with the rats and the Jasper/Josh man whore attitude! love the story, I'm so glad I found it! thanks again - lisa
Luvntwilight chapter 2 . 10/13/2009
I so love this story. It's perfect!
YazPistachio19 chapter 2 . 10/13/2009
Lately I've been on a Baseball fic kick and The Lucky Charm is just perfect. I don't have a Soxward yet. (Why do I hear "Need him, need him, got him, got him, got him..." in my head right about now?) I like the story so far, but I gotta tell you *please don't throw anything* I'm a Yankee fan, so knowing how much I am enjoying your story, please be kind...;)
Keira Sawyer chapter 2 . 10/13/2009
oy vey...
squarepancake chapter 2 . 10/13/2009
Whoa Bella, way to show a spine! That's awesome. Edward, I have no advice for you. Except figure out whether you like Bella on a personal level, because if you don't, you need to move on.
Boston Blondie chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
ok ... I totally love it! Carlisle as my beloved Mike Lowell... I can see that! from one boston girl to another (two of you) Thank you! I can't wait to read more - Lisa
magic-potr chapter 2 . 10/13/2009
Well, fuck. That was a really good chapter. I really like this story and I'll be waiting for the next chap.
appafangirl chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
mm hot! haha I love your stories and can't wait for more of this!

I did think it was strange that Edward got so pissed when Bella just mentioned New York. Most of the players aren't even from Boston, and they get traded a lot so I just wouldn't think he would react so strongly to a city...I'd say it's mostly the fans that create the enmity.

gah I just went tirade didn't I? Gr wasn't trying to criticize, like I said I love your work!
Whitney Love chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
I like Baseballward...LOL. Yummy. That last part with the kissing and clawing at each other was freaking fucktastic!
OliviaJane chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
Holy heck, that was hilarious. Then you go and have him squeeze her hand at the end, how sweet it that? LOVED IT!

Can't wait too see how you fit Alice and Rose in the story. It sounds like Em could really use some Rose lovin' about now. And Jasper needs Alice to tame his wild ways. lol
lindyrb chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
Hm...interesting start! Better be prepared for lots of baseball inuendo...getting to first base, batting a home run, gettin' down and dirty in the dugout...

Looking forward to more!
Eliph95 chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
oh the last scene was too hot..inoe i'll love this story!
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