Reviews for We Must Sweep Out the Shadows
Lavenderangel chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
Well this is just a little bit of perfection. I like the subtle ways Teresa takes care of him, the shoulder rub was especially sweet. For some reason, the way he started awake and straight into talking really got to me. Like, even though everyone had clearly seen he was upset, he still felt he had to say something, instead of just rushing out. Ugh, the entire thing is so bittersweet.
Blue-Starlight92 chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
Very VERY good. I really liked it. I haven't had the chance to see much of The Mentalist lately, and this was just fantastic to read. Very good job.
shewhorunswithvampires chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
cool! very well done!
Doyle0915 chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
Patrick sure does love that couch!
Cora Clavia chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
Nice job! Creative and nicely written.
cureless chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
that was really beautiful.. I loved it .. great job!

added to my fav.!
SpaceAnJL chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
I like this piece. You got them so well. Lisbon caring, and Jane not quite opening up, and both of them just being in tune with each other. Lovely.

(Cho the bounty hunter is an awesome idea.)
iloveethementalisttt chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
i realy like this storyy!

and the quote at the end was great(:
TexannaRose chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
:) aw very sweet!

xxRosaxx
PhoenixWytch chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
Thanks for writing.
mwalter1 chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
Sweet - I like what Lisbon called him. It would be cool if you continued this into more ways Lisbon gets Jane to sleep.