|Reviews for We Were Nomads, Bathed in Concrete|
| momma23 chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
Oh wow. That was incrediable.
| 1853kaz chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
Great story! You had me worried there for a while.. Am I that addicted to the Hollywood ending? Apparently so! And you delivered! With a lovely twist. Thanks for the enjoyable read. :)
| Starshinedown chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
This is a great little one-shot. It makes me glad you had a writer's block moment with the big story. :D
| eridani chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
Enjoyed reading this greatly, after randomly checking to see if anything has been happening with IVO. Good luck with all your writing!
| ktveronica chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
there are no words.
that was a FANTASTIC one shot
| jenniblu421 chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
This was really fabulous. And when Edward said that he had met a girl, I started crying so hard while sitting at my desk at work. Thank God my boss hadn't come in yet, I would have been busted. I sincerely mean it when I say that I loved this. And finally, for once, Edward was the human and Bella the vampire. Thank you for writing something fresh! Great job!
| LizetteMarie chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
Wow. I was in tears. tho i can see this becoming a story. But i love it any how.
| Thirst for Knowledge chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
This was neat! I wasn't expecting that at all. I felt awful for Edward, who'd missed out on a relationship with the girl of his dreams. Mike Newton's confession that Bella'd dumped him just made everything worse. When Edward heard Bella's voice, I was thrilled for him because he could finally pursue what he'd always wanted and for me because I knew the story was about to turn a corner. Well done!
| iiChibi chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
| eliza6801 chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
| ScienceGeek91 chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
Haunting and truly beautiful...
| ginab chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
I am an idiot and totally didnt see that coming. I tend to NOT think of "how this will end" when I read a story or watch a movie. I dont want to come up with it myself, duh, I want YOU to surprise me. And that YOU DID! Holy hell. That was PaInFuL in the middle and I freakin loved it. Awesome! ;)
| For the Love of Lisa chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
So. I loved it. I loved that the characters were totally believable. I loved that it wasn't over the top. I loved that when Bella made the comment about wanting stamps in her passport, in my head I said 'her character wouldn't have a passport'. And then Bella mentioned that she didn't have a passport. I love that there weren't any cheesy attempts to sound literary. This fic is like an oasis in a dry, dry desert of really bad fic. I have never favorited a fic. This might be my first. Now I really want to read your other one, but am scared to start a WIP that will drive me crazy with desire for the conclusion.
Also-I just read your profile. Maybe your fic speaks to me because I am also a law grad who hated law school and secretly writes fic when not doing lame lawyer stuff. And yeah-super secretive about it cause I too try to act too cool and cynical for this shizz. But I have noticed quite a few legal type people in the fandom-perhaps our career path drives us to something as far from what we do for a living as possible to unwind?
Again-awesome story. Thanks for sharing it.
| kikiMA chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
Great one shot!
I don't think IVO is a 35 chapter mess. It's my favorite fic of all time and I wait with bated breath for an update!
| Claw chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
Wow, very impressive. I am so amazed by you and your style.