|Reviews for We Were Nomads, Bathed in Concrete|
| Scattered Logic chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
This was recommended to me by Ginny_Weasley31, and I'm glad that she sent me over. I enjoyed this very much. It was superior version of the Bella-is-the-vampire-this-time trope than I usually see, and you did a wonderful job with it. You convey the obsessiveness of Edward's nature without giving it that underlying squicky quality that so many of them (and even the books) did. ~applause~
| teeheeitsme chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
I'm in complete awe - that was absolutely amazing! love it love it love it :D
| BurntOrange chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
Fan fiction does not make me cry, but I am crying pretty hard right now.
| byhelenahandbasket chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
Delicious angsty loveliness.
| Twilight Enabler chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
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| OnFireForChrist chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
This was great. I hope you change your mind about continuing it.
| stories1 chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
oh la la, what a story! I was half expecting Bella to come back to life, but I was expecting the story to be all human so that was an interesting twist for me. It's nice to have Edward chase after the girl for once :) Great story, I'm dying for the continuation of IVO!
| Ghostly Green chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
That was... beautiful. So angsty and full of pain, but also so wonderful at the end. I was hoping - HOPING, PRAYING - that she hadn't really died, that she was a vampire and he'd see her again. And the end was lovely; I loved the whole one-shot. I wish it wasn't a one-shot, but I know that you're having enough trouble writing "IVO," so I won't push it (even though I really wish you'd continue with this story; you know, them talking to the Cullen-clan in Alaska, the change, a brief and adorable epilogue... lol).
- Just read the story again, and it just tugs at my heart and makes me want to cry. Edward's pain just cuts at me :(.
| philyra-tales chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
I truly, truly loved this piece. I was so happy to get into my email and see an update from you. I love the title, and the story itself was so wonderfully written.
The writing is simply amazing. I was just totally sucked in from the beginning. I thought you got the characterizations down perfectly, which comes as no surprise, really. :) I kept thinking this was ultimately going to be an AH story and up until the Bella's death, I thought, somehow, there's going to be a happy ending in here somewhere.
I really like the ending you came up with. It's bittersweet, quite the right balance. I swear, I was bawling the entire time I was reading this. I'm glad Edward and Bella managed to find each other again and it was a really good twist to make Bella the vampire first and Edward assuming the Bella role from canon.. Well done! I am in absolute awe of your brilliant writing. :)
| Aniveria chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
that was a a nice twist.)
| prospectcat chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
This is really sweet. Thanks!
| blubuttrfly10 chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
Wow, I didn't even think Bella would come back as human but I loved that Edward got Bella in the end. Great job!
| MarySoul chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
Wonderful story. Very moving.
| jilburfm chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
What a beautiful story! Thanks for writing it!
Best wishes on the wedding! That is, if i hasn't already happened! And if it has, Whoo-hoo! All that planning is finally over! Congrats:-)
| mrswilliamdarcy chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
cool story! i'm glad edward got his bella in the end. i love how you turned the story around and made her become the vampire first.
also glad to hear you're not done with your other story because i really love that one!