Reviews for We Were Nomads, Bathed in Concrete
kmoye chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
awesome. awe. some.

wow. yeah i got nothing but wow and awesome. its THAT good! thanks for posting this.

wow. and again, awesome!
Twilight44 chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
That was really good!
Skeeter McKitty chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
Great one shot. I really didn't expect Bella to return towards the end, but thankfully she did. Too bad it wont be expanded on. Just a few more chapters. Wait, never mind, update IVO first. )
5 times the fun chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
Great plot twist and a lovely relief to all the angst.

I have to say, I liked this better than IVO. The Bella in this was fun, even if she did stay in a nowhere relationship with Mike Newton for too long. And when confronted with reality, and what Edward wanted, she didn't endlessly whine and make them both miserable.

Don't worry about fluff in IVO, it could use some, and it deserves some as soon as Bella wakes up and smells the coffee. Let the clear writing you displayed in this story be your inspiration for the next chapter of IVO.
AndraLee chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
I love this Edward and I getting to know vampire Bella would be great; a 20-25 chapter spawn wouldn't be so terrible.
Epatz chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
wow that was really really good :) im so glad they both found happiness.
LindyP chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
That was great! You are an amazing talented writer, no doubt about that! Your Edward here really pulled on my heartstrings-so sad! I am glad you have not abandoned IVO. Incidently, I just started rereading it because it had been over a year since I first read it. It really is one of the best fanfics here I have ever read & am looking forward to reading your next post whenever it is ready! I think I had read over on the Twilighted thread (where I lurk sometimes)that are are getting hitched, so congrats!

LindyP :)
vegandroid chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
I want more!
UnaRJ chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
Loved every word of it. Sometimes it's good to write something completely different.
dellaterra chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
This is just gorgeous! So poignant, so painful. You have conveyed Edward's loss and desolation so perfectly.

I was beginning to wonder if Edward was suicidal when he went back to the meadow. Like him, I had no hope for a HEA by then, so I think I was just as shocked and astonished as he was when Bella appeared. Well done!

Thank you for sharing this exquisite little gem of a story.
AlwaysAround888 chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
alright i thought i was going to be crying the whole time i read this but im glad it had a turn around point :)

plus you wrote this very well,

cant wait for another story/update!
fdksn chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
I thought this was very good. I liked it.
poetrytoprose chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
Another fic from you that perfectly captures the essence of Edward and Bella; these two are just not complete without each other. The beginning progression between them was so sweet and I had to keep reminding myself of the beginning, that she was gone, so it made it all that harder to accept. Edward's emotions of not being able to move on made me ache. I kept hoping that he would somehow find happiness so I actually let out a 'yay!' at the end when Bella appeared.

Lovely, lovely work, Oxy! I'm sure you'll get requests to continue it some day - and I'd be lying if I said I didn't hope for the same - but it was a perfect ending.
neologismitastical chapter 1 . 9/28/2009

This is AMAZING. No other words for it.

KristyRose chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
I love your style. I was drawn into the story so quickly and felt for Edward the whole time. Bravo!
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