|Reviews for We Were Nomads, Bathed in Concrete|
| Cash.inMyBootsJR chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
this is a great one-shot, very intricate and quite dark. i felt compelled to read on, and i loved how bella was almost a shadow of mike's!
| Twi Reader1 chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
This is really good. I like the change- the fact that Bella is the vamp and Edward is the human.
I'm guessing that Bella will bring Edward to Alaska and get Carlisle to change him?
Also is this after Edward finished med school? (or pre-med?)
anywho... keep writing!
| youngandmature chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
I wasn't expecting the ending. I expected him to say goodbye and let go though I'm glad it was a HEA. My heart and head hurt and I'm bawling and it's all because of your words.
-Did B ever love Mike in this one? Did she love Edward?
-'Some psycho currently locked up in maximum security stole that from him, and try as he might, Edward can't recapture the potential, the what could have been.'
What is the potential E can't recapture, what's the could have been?
Is IVO done?
| KayRayLovesLove chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
I always cry.
| anneeeee chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
it's really detailed, which is lovely.
i think you're amazing, really.
i felt really bad for edward, but i'm glad they got together in the end.
somehow, my heart is still sad, but happy at the same time for them.
thank you for writing this. :)
| Light-OFTHE-World-18 chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
That was great!
Thank you so much!
| HeavenForbidWePonder chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
| lindsjc chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
| In.Between.The.Lines chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
Wow, that was intense...pretty intense. I love it!
| jmrbear chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
Your story drew me in and shut out the rest of the world while I was reading it. I was completely drawn in and captivated by Edward's pain in your fictional world. Thank-you
| Los Grotos chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
They said all the right things.
| Iplaythefrenchhornlovetwilight chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
Was she going to change him? Just wondering. It's really good!
| edmom chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
| interested party chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
Seriously, I used to avoid one-shots because I thought, how can you really tell a story in 10,000 words or less? UH, not smart on my part. This is one of the best pieces of fic I've ever read - not just fanfic but anything. I loved it, I was pulled into them and his hurt and even her, even though we don't meet her until the end. Thank you for sharing this amazing story! I had seen it on some authors "favorites" list, and I'm so happy I finally read it!
| MeLanieHeleYna chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
There should be a law for stories that make you want to cry your guts out. Best story ever. Keep up the good work.