|Reviews for We Were Nomads, Bathed in Concrete|
| JoeyLi chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
i loved the first 80% of your story because it was so raw and beautiful and sad and just everything i thought a plot like this would play out. An idea like this has been floating in my head for ages and you've realized it. Nonetheless, i thought it kind of a cop out that she became a vampire, i sort of wished she stayed dead. However, it is your story and your ending is yours and despite my not exactly loving it the story was extremely well written and the story was just an emotional roller coaster. Thank you!
| loudashope113 chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
i can't believe how many emotions i have experienced from a o/s!
This is beautiful. Edward's pain is palpable, and, in a way, I felt as though this was human edward's version of what Bella experienced in New Moon...but, ya know, better. More real. Also, I love how your Mike Newton wasn't an asshole or totally lame. He was just the other man, the obstacle to Edward's idealized happiness. This was brilliant, because I really didn't give a second thought about Bella's death and how out of place the circumstances were. The vampire ending surprised me.
recc'ed from hisgoldeneyes. beautiful job.
| IllicitWriter chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
That was so awesome. You even had me crying! I also liked the twist at the end. Didn't see that coming...
| katie valentine chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
Beautiful. I totally didn't see that coming somehow; her becoming a vampire! Not sure why, cause I thought initially this was a all-human fic? LOL. Glad it isn't, sounds pretty cool!
| ElspethGordie chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
love, love, love this. Excellent writing. Great story arc, and good characterization for a short. It's rare that a fanfic can truly engross a reader's emotions and you accomplished this. Lovely job. Rec'd on
| Erint0812 chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
Wow. This is amazing. I was completely shocked by the plot twist. I didn't see it coming at all. Love it.
| IronicallyUnconventional chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
I was literally crying my eyes out !
Amazing i was screaming for her to come back :L
and she did aw :')
| Elbee96 chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
discovered this today & LOVED IT!
| ISparkleOnMyOwn chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
wow. i never thought bella could be still alive and when i realized she was i was like... dunno.. wtf. i never expected vampires to be in here, it was quite surprising.
i loved the ending, especially because its a happy one. oh, and the story made my cry. yeah i'm like that )
its a shame that this is a one shot, because i'd love to hear more of this story.
ivo... update! ) take your time though, we all know itll be worth it!
and my english sucks, i know. im still learning )
| alpacacat0401 chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
That was awesome! Great job!
| Korissaa chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
I loved the story of Balla and Edward in reverse. Your fic told so much in such a short period of time. It takes a lot of talent to evoke that much emotion. Thanks for this beautiful little chapter story!
| SunKing chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
This is one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read. So complex, and yet so simple. Just... I'm kind of speechless here at the moment. I'll think about this story for a long time.
| halconmia chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
I wondered what had happened to Bella and since Dr. Cullen was mentioned I thought she might have been turned into a vampire. I am glad they got to be together in the end.
| LoveDoesThat chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
Yay. Nice O/S. I lovez a happy ending! :-D
| saysay-rose chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
oh my goodness! this is one of the best stories ive ever read no lie! i just keep reading it over and over again! its amazing