|Reviews for She Sleeps|
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/8/2017
Lol, I just reviewed but holy shit. 4 inch stilettos? Why is he in a patients room without a reason? Where are the other mental health professionals? They don't even let you keep your toothbrush outside of certain times. This fic is just bsing for angst.
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/8/2017
Yeah, no. Have you ever been in a mental health facility before? This would never happen in a million years. There are several employee's who watch over you and catalog your behavior and sleep schedule hourly. They don't leave you alone in your room with the door closed in case you try to kill yourself and there are cameras everywhere. This is especially true because Bella is a minor so she'd be in a facility with other minors over 13. This is cringe to the max degree.
| Pathatlon chapter 9 . 4/18/2016
Hey, just a tip: separate your speaking lines from person to person, as it gets difficult to read.
| L0VEx3 chapter 28 . 12/10/2015
Very good story, I am obviously a little late on reading it but I loved it. Can't wait to read more of your work and if they delete this story I will follow you over on the other sites. Good job! 3
| Ashmerlin chapter 28 . 6/12/2015
This was a great story. Not an easy one to deal with at times but certainly a great one filled with highs and lows. I want to say thank you for sharing this story with us.
| Mitzi1958 chapter 8 . 3/25/2015
I am so excited! I have been looking for this story for years, it was one of the first stories I read on fanfiction that I didn't understand to write the title or even your pen name, so I joined some groups asking for help nut I got some things wrong in my summery so I guess it was hard to locate and low and behold I find you on my own! I will put this in my favorites and recommand it to all my other friends in our groups! Your story is too good to miss. Hate that Bella is where she is but help is coming and I really love the ideal that Rosealie will be one who will help her deal with what is happening to her now.
| BridieM chapter 28 . 3/2/2015
Thanks for writing this story and leaving it up for us to read. The change you made with the POVs really helped the story's progression and readability. At times the plot was difficult to read purely because of the subject matter. I felt that your writing matured and improved as the chapters progressed. I do hope RL has been kind to you and that your muse inspires your imagination to write again. Best wishes
| BridieM chapter 13 . 3/1/2015
I wondered is Vic was part of this
| BridieM chapter 10 . 3/1/2015
She's a cop's daughter. Good on her.
| BridieM chapter 7 . 3/1/2015
I enjoyed Alice's POV
| BridieM chapter 2 . 3/1/2015
Enjoyed these two chapters. Thanks
| Guest chapter 18 . 8/26/2014
In the hope of helpful critique, the story is very repetative, as each persons point if view repeats the same information, and does not advance the story but every chapter you go back and cover the same thing again. This makes the pace of the story extremely slow
| ChristinaAguileraFan chapter 9 . 2/2/2014
Omg such a sad chapter but I love your plot. You are an amazing writer! :)
| Edward's My Obsession 1971 chapter 14 . 12/22/2013
| Edward's My Obsession 1971 chapter 6 . 12/22/2013
I'm loving your story. Good job.