|Reviews for The Transfer|
| akirakurosawa chapter 18 . 12/1/2014
OH I WOULD JUMP ON THAT BOY AND DO WICKED THINGS TO HIM ON THE HOD OF HIS CAR!
Your Edward is always so considerate and so lovely, and I just wish to find my own Edward to be with him for the next 25 years and then some more...
I don't know if I'm making sense now, but I just... I'm... exasperatedč I guess!
| akirakurosawa chapter 17 . 12/1/2014
A thirst only she could quench - lovely. They are most certainly getting closer, and I can't wait to see what it'll be like when Jake comes to visit! :D I feel some testosterone battles coming up! Ooooh, and what about Bella's birthday!? What is Edward going to get her?
| akirakurosawa chapter 16 . 12/1/2014
I feel like I'm going to cry. That is just... sad, and beautiful, and I know she's gonna pick him, but, I don't know, the way you write is just lovely and it makes me want to hug you and poor Edward and everything basically.
I'm a little emotional, sorry.
| akirakurosawa chapter 15 . 12/1/2014
Hmmm... not really sure what to think about this one. Damn. Eduardo is so awesome, wish I had one of my own.
| akirakurosawa chapter 13 . 12/1/2014
I get where Bella is coming from, I really do, and she says she doesn't want to hurt anyone, and yet she's hurting Edward.
I mean, if she's gonna be a whiny little... ahem... then I'll have to kick her arse!
| akirakurosawa chapter 11 . 11/30/2014
I think I'm gonna go crazy. Officially. The tension is killing me here !
| akirakurosawa chapter 10 . 11/30/2014
Oh God this is torture! Come on come on come ooooooon you guys!
I love it how you make it seem like they've known each other for years, even though it's been a couple of days and only 10 chapters.
And I'm fucking thrilled that I've got 63 more!
| akirakurosawa chapter 8 . 11/30/2014
worst. timing. EVER!
| akirakurosawa chapter 6 . 11/30/2014
Aaaaah. Wow. I had all these great thoughts I wanted to say but I just fucking hate Jake.
Yeah. He reminds me of my asshole of an ex boyfriend - why didn't I stay in our lame little town, and why don't I want to have kids at the age of 21, and why am I in medical school when it's obvious I'm not smart enough, I mean FUCKING MOTIVATED enough to go through with it?
Sorry... bad memories.
This chapter made me a bit sad because of that. Otherwise, lovely. Let's burn some freakin fairies.
| akirakurosawa chapter 5 . 11/30/2014
AAAAARGH I'm gonna murder Jake!
And the plot thickens !*insert evil evil laugh*
Good thinking about the bitch brigade :D
| akirakurosawa chapter 4 . 11/30/2014
Oh just IDK have Bitchtoria swallow one of her crystals as she practices giving a bj on it and choke to death, so Bella can have her room for herself, then Edward can come and they can have hot monkey sex EVERYWHERE, and Alice and Jasper too, without Edward having to witness it in his room!
(It kinda feels wrong to write all this, it's like I'm writing to my Mom... except my Mom does not know the yumminess that is EAM!)
| akirakurosawa chapter 3 . 11/30/2014
Jake is a whiny bitch! You are going to make me suffer through some angsty Bella as she tries to decide between doing the right thing and not cheating on Jake with the SEX ON FIRE GOD that is the one and only EDWARD ANTHONY CULLEN, aren't you?
I'll endure if there is my STARLIGHTED at the end!
| akirakurosawa chapter 2 . 11/30/2014
Oh my God oh my Gooood! It's that time of the month soon, so expect another tide of my crazy reviews for this story - I already see I'm going to love it!
Lots and lots and looots of kisses!
| Willow86 chapter 68 . 11/28/2014
This chapter was offensive to me as a woman and is exactly why men look down on women. Bella played a ridiculous game with Edward, refusing to speak to him until he made a ridiculously over the top gesture. Disgusting. This is why men think less of women, because we play stupid games like this. Instead of being a grown up and talking to the man she "loves" who had been through a traumatic experience, Bella played "hard to get"? Bella didn't like it when Edward acted like a child, so she turned around and did the same thing? Men and women will never be treated equally when women act like this.
| Guest chapter 73 . 11/15/2014
Loved this! Thanks for giving us such great characters to read.