|Reviews for The Transfer|
| akirakurosawa chapter 40 . 12/3/2014
Well, I have a Physiology test tmrw, but these kids are sooooo interesting I can't stop reading!
I'm blaming you if I fail!
(No I'm not, I already studied, but I guess ff beats revision :D )
I love it all, how they made it right, and talked, and insecure Edward and just gaaaaah! :))))))
| akirakurosawa chapter 23 . 12/2/2014
Best first kiss ever.
| akirakurosawa chapter 21 . 12/1/2014
And I'm crying.
Everybody handled it more mature than I expected.
I remember breaking up with my first boyfriend. I told him I loved him and that he'd always be a friend, but I wasn't in love with him, and that I needed to get some things straight in my head. I hurt him so bad he started yelling, and didn't want to speak with me. I ended up crying more than ever before in my life.
Two months later, he came to see me off on my school trip as a surprise and hugged me and told me I was right and he was sorry that he acted like a jerk. We still talk today, not that much of a friendship anymore (he moved really far away), but it's always so, so nice when I see him and hug him. It's one of my best memories, and Jake reminded me of that right now. Thank you.
| akirakurosawa chapter 20 . 12/1/2014
Oh fuck ! I hate when boys are fighting. Honestly, I just think it's ugly, and it scares me and makes me want to cry. I don't know why :(
Hope Edward's gonna be okay, I guess I'll be hearing from him in the next chapter... oh, and Jacob is a fucking jerk.
| akirakurosawa chapter 19 . 12/1/2014
Finally! Somebody knocked some sense into that girl!
Although, hmm... hope Bella won't be sad too long.
I need schmexy in my life, by schmexy I mean Edward. Soon. Like, now.
| akirakurosawa chapter 18 . 12/1/2014
OH I WOULD JUMP ON THAT BOY AND DO WICKED THINGS TO HIM ON THE HOD OF HIS CAR!
Your Edward is always so considerate and so lovely, and I just wish to find my own Edward to be with him for the next 25 years and then some more...
I don't know if I'm making sense now, but I just... I'm... exasperatedč I guess!
| akirakurosawa chapter 17 . 12/1/2014
A thirst only she could quench - lovely. They are most certainly getting closer, and I can't wait to see what it'll be like when Jake comes to visit! :D I feel some testosterone battles coming up! Ooooh, and what about Bella's birthday!? What is Edward going to get her?
| akirakurosawa chapter 16 . 12/1/2014
I feel like I'm going to cry. That is just... sad, and beautiful, and I know she's gonna pick him, but, I don't know, the way you write is just lovely and it makes me want to hug you and poor Edward and everything basically.
I'm a little emotional, sorry.
| akirakurosawa chapter 15 . 12/1/2014
Hmmm... not really sure what to think about this one. Damn. Eduardo is so awesome, wish I had one of my own.
| akirakurosawa chapter 13 . 12/1/2014
I get where Bella is coming from, I really do, and she says she doesn't want to hurt anyone, and yet she's hurting Edward.
I mean, if she's gonna be a whiny little... ahem... then I'll have to kick her arse!
| akirakurosawa chapter 11 . 11/30/2014
I think I'm gonna go crazy. Officially. The tension is killing me here !
| akirakurosawa chapter 10 . 11/30/2014
Oh God this is torture! Come on come on come ooooooon you guys!
I love it how you make it seem like they've known each other for years, even though it's been a couple of days and only 10 chapters.
And I'm fucking thrilled that I've got 63 more!
| akirakurosawa chapter 8 . 11/30/2014
worst. timing. EVER!
| akirakurosawa chapter 6 . 11/30/2014
Aaaaah. Wow. I had all these great thoughts I wanted to say but I just fucking hate Jake.
Yeah. He reminds me of my asshole of an ex boyfriend - why didn't I stay in our lame little town, and why don't I want to have kids at the age of 21, and why am I in medical school when it's obvious I'm not smart enough, I mean FUCKING MOTIVATED enough to go through with it?
Sorry... bad memories.
This chapter made me a bit sad because of that. Otherwise, lovely. Let's burn some freakin fairies.
| akirakurosawa chapter 5 . 11/30/2014
AAAAARGH I'm gonna murder Jake!
And the plot thickens !*insert evil evil laugh*
Good thinking about the bitch brigade :D