Reviews for The Transfer
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 20 . 2/26
Bella just needs to rip it off like a band aid and be done with it. She is not IN love with Jake and is really doing both of them a disservice by continuing the relationship.

I was put in that position once and had to choose... It was very hard to hurt the other person, but in the end she has to do what makes HER happy.
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 19 . 2/26
Bella is starting to see the light...
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 17 . 2/25
I bet Jessica and Angela were dazzled. LOL! Who wouldn't be?

And Alice's shriek...priceless.

Countdown to Jake's arrival...dum da dum dum
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 16 . 2/25
I was thinking it was something along those lines.

What is Bella going to do when Jake comes? And where is he sleeping?
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 15 . 2/25
Time to get rid of clingy Jake...
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 14 . 2/23
I do not see how these two are going to be able to go much longer.
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 13 . 2/23
OMG! This has got to stop! I am dying!
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 12 . 2/23
How does she do it? How does she just ruin me? - LOL! Laughing so hard at this!

And Edward smelling Bella's bedding? OMG! Priceless.

Love all of Bella's Freudian Slips...
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 11 . 2/23
I think the proverbial sh** is going to hit the fan when Jake comes to visit.

I remember breaking up with my HS boyfriend when I went away to college. Similar to J/B. He didn't want to go to college or leave our small town. I wanted OUT! Went to a large university and never looked back. But, it was awful breaking up because I did not want to hurt him...

I have a feeling that Jake will give her an ultimatum at some point.
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 10 . 2/23
Dying to know what happened in HS to have Edward so f'd up with girls.
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 5 . 2/22
Now I am really interested in what happened to Edward and this girl in HS.

Love a conniving Pixie. LOL! Hoping Bella will move in with Alice SOON!
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 4 . 2/22
I want Victoria and Lauren to be roommates. Would love to be a fly on the wall in that room. LOL!

I have a feeling that Lauren is going to be all over Edward...

And PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE let Bella have a backbone in dealing with Victoria.

I wish she and Alice could be roommates. Then we could put fire hair WitchToria together with FishEyes Lauren!
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 3 . 2/22
So something happened to Edward is HS with a girl...
I have a feeling that Bella is going to quickly outgrow Jake.
And WitchToria has yet to make an appearance...
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 2 . 2/22
Victoria sounds like a witch and I bet she is after Edward. I hope Bella survives living with her.

I think Edward has met his destiny also...
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 1 . 2/22
LOL! However, I don't think was as bad when Bella and Edward met in FFSGSS.

I am taking a wild guess that Charlie was policeman who stopped Edward from speeding...

Poor Edward. I have had those days too. This chapter reminded me so much of when my sons moved into their dorms freshman year of college. Although, there were no large hills to climb...thank goodness.
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