Reviews for The Transfer
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 15 . 2/25/2016
Time to get rid of clingy Jake...
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 14 . 2/23/2016
I do not see how these two are going to be able to go much longer.
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 13 . 2/23/2016
OMG! This has got to stop! I am dying!
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 12 . 2/23/2016
How does she do it? How does she just ruin me? - LOL! Laughing so hard at this!

And Edward smelling Bella's bedding? OMG! Priceless.

Love all of Bella's Freudian Slips...
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 11 . 2/23/2016
I think the proverbial sh** is going to hit the fan when Jake comes to visit.

I remember breaking up with my HS boyfriend when I went away to college. Similar to J/B. He didn't want to go to college or leave our small town. I wanted OUT! Went to a large university and never looked back. But, it was awful breaking up because I did not want to hurt him...

I have a feeling that Jake will give her an ultimatum at some point.
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 10 . 2/23/2016
Dying to know what happened in HS to have Edward so f'd up with girls.
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 5 . 2/22/2016
Now I am really interested in what happened to Edward and this girl in HS.

Love a conniving Pixie. LOL! Hoping Bella will move in with Alice SOON!
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 4 . 2/22/2016
I want Victoria and Lauren to be roommates. Would love to be a fly on the wall in that room. LOL!

I have a feeling that Lauren is going to be all over Edward...

And PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE let Bella have a backbone in dealing with Victoria.

I wish she and Alice could be roommates. Then we could put fire hair WitchToria together with FishEyes Lauren!
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 3 . 2/22/2016
So something happened to Edward is HS with a girl...
I have a feeling that Bella is going to quickly outgrow Jake.
And WitchToria has yet to make an appearance...
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 2 . 2/22/2016
Victoria sounds like a witch and I bet she is after Edward. I hope Bella survives living with her.

I think Edward has met his destiny also...
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 1 . 2/22/2016
LOL! However, I don't think was as bad when Bella and Edward met in FFSGSS.

I am taking a wild guess that Charlie was policeman who stopped Edward from speeding...

Poor Edward. I have had those days too. This chapter reminded me so much of when my sons moved into their dorms freshman year of college. Although, there were no large hills to climb...thank goodness.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/22/2016
This was by far my favorite story when I started reading FF. Actually it got me hooked on FF. This story is seriously under reviewed LOL. Poor Edward probably just had the worst day of his life. Rereading this first chapter made me so happy LOL
Sunshirae chapter 60 . 2/12/2016
Gosh...FINALLY! I thought if I had to read another chapter before they got there I was going to expire. I like the mood he set and the fact that he took her for a ride to come back home was perfect. Good thing his parent's were away. Quick thinking on his behalf a perfect love cove. Nicely done!
Sunshirae chapter 56 . 2/9/2016
I like that Rose is gitty and shrills like a hyena along with Alice. I love how they all get along. I like how Emmett conveyed his message and took his position to heart. Chief Swan knew what he was doing to Edward and Bella was just so wicked (poor Edward). As always you always deliver an incredible chapter. Thank you.
Sunshirae chapter 55 . 2/9/2016
Wow, I enjoyed the good natured banter this group had; it was full of laughter, love, respect and just overall enjoyable. I wish I could have done that with my siblings. I was a little scared thinking their game was somehow going to be interrupted. But it turned out to be an exciting day full of the best medicine...laughter. Thank you for sharing this story, it just makes me feel gitty inside. :)
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