Reviews for Masquerade
AlterEgoGirl chapter 2 . 10/25/2010

Where r you those days?

I want you to finish that work :'( You'll make me cry if you don't do it!

So please, pleaaaaaase, be kind with me :D

If your musa is dissapear, start looking other one, but you must put a end at this history, only for your fans and for yourself, my friend!


I don't know if you'll understand this comment, but I did my best writing it :) I'm not english!

So, do you undestand what important is that you do another chapter or ever more!

I wanna know how it finish!

I know that Vampire Knight is now at the worse for we - Zero girls, but I hope you undestand that hope is the best we have :) Finally, you know, Yuuki will return to Zero! Expect for that moment!


Well, if you don't know what i'm tellin' to you, I'll must buy a dictionary for my next comment, don't I?

hahahaha, XXX!

But! I'll never comment if there's no more chapters to do it!

Love, AEG.
xXthenextbookwormXx chapter 2 . 10/14/2010
The problem for Zero is Yuki knows him almost better than he knows himself, so she sees right through any walls he puts up, to more or less what he's thinking. Please update for me!
Seirei no Ryuu chapter 2 . 2/19/2010
very . . . woah. Update soon, please!
NinjaSheik chapter 2 . 1/3/2010
Natalie Beck chapter 2 . 10/30/2009
Please, please, please continue writing this! I would love to read another take on this part that includes more ZeroxYuuki! I really hope you update soon!
anime1loverme chapter 1 . 10/18/2009

When Zero stopped a pureblood from shakking hand with Wakaba Yuuki holds Zero's hand and ask him to let go but Zero said harshly to don't touch him..If you guys look carefully at her reaction at that moment you can see that she's a little taken aback but she pretended that it didn't really bothered her but in the end of the chapter when she had a flashback about it she cried(or look like crying) on the door of the ballroom..I just know that she has a feeling towards Zero but she didn't realise that she feels about him more than a brother or a best friend..huuh..I just hope she come to realise it quicker..
AlarmedMouse chapter 2 . 10/15/2009
GlassTears8 chapter 2 . 10/8/2009
That's so sad! What an amazing story! I really hope you update soon; I can't wait to see where this is going!
alwaysmyoriginalsin chapter 2 . 10/8/2009
Great chapter, again. Zero covering his heart up, Poor him. I think he definitely knows, deep down, that the Yuuki he sees now as a pureblood is really not different from the Yuuki that was a human, and I look forward to him understanding and accepting that in the manga. 3

Looking forward to the next chapter!
alwaysmyoriginalsin chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
Wow, this was really beautifully written. I especially liked the description of the ball-room and the people there; detailed, but not so much that you skip over it. That tends to happen to a lot of writers where the details overwhelm you, but isn't so here.

I also LOVED this part: "Out of the blue, she felt a familiar gaze on her. Even without looking, she already had an idea who it was." It caught the closeness of their relationship perfectly.

The whole thing was such a sad exchange, and I agree that Zero didn't see HER. He saw a pureblood princess, and nothing more, which will surely tear at Yuuki's heart.

MythStar Black Dragon chapter 2 . 10/6/2009
loved it so wish they were togther and i agree on their thoughts thats how i see it wold have gone

Ongaku Neko chapter 2 . 10/5/2009

Poor Zero! I'll hug you! LOL You did a great job with writing this. I could so see them thinking this way.
Catalyna Christopher chapter 2 . 10/5/2009
yeah i wouldn't have blamed her if she did that either...

anyway, i love this chapter! it was so emotional! keep it up!
GinaLovesZero chapter 2 . 10/4/2009
I WISH Yuuki would jump into Zero's arms! If not now, later! I would cry tears of joy!

Yeah, after these recent chapters, I think many people have been switching to Zero and Yori. But I'm a true Zeki fan! :D

Can't wait for the next chapter!
sakurasapprentice7 chapter 2 . 10/4/2009
I know!

Loved it! You were right it was short but it's short for a pacific reason, not laziness which is why I didn't mention it before...

Good job and I hope you keep it up! ;)
31 | Page 1 .. Last Next »