Reviews for The Benefits of Fresh Air
Original Guest chapter 24 . 6/21/2019
Oh my gosh this was so funny. Spock can be so totally clueless.
The scene where he was running pa'ash-limuk reminded of a scene in a movie that came out late 70s or early 80s. Wish I could remember the name of it but this story was great.
Dutyfree chapter 24 . 2/6/2018
Interesting story. Definitely didn’t go where I thought it would. It was well-written tho!
Dutyfree chapter 22 . 2/6/2018
Okay, I’m starting to realize that this story wasn’t meant to be taken seriously AT ALL.
Dutyfree chapter 21 . 2/6/2018
Dutyfree chapter 14 . 2/6/2018
awww, I’m glad he knew exactly what Nyota needed :)
Dutyfree chapter 12 . 2/6/2018
I don’t get why she’s so insecure in this story. It’s a bizarre characterization. But author knows best :)
Dutyfree chapter 11 . 2/6/2018
Uhura is acting really out of character... she’s normally the consummate professional. I don’t like the fact that everyone is talking down to her
but I still have another 13 chapters to go, so I’m sure it’ll all make sense
Dutyfree chapter 10 . 2/6/2018
beautiful imagery in the last couple of lines
Dutyfree chapter 9 . 2/6/2018
I’m used to Uhura being more seems uncharacteristically snarky here. But I agree with her that ensign Mallory is acting weird.
Dutyfree chapter 8 . 2/6/2018
Mallory seems a bit off... this is gonna get pretty interesting :)
Dutyfree chapter 6 . 2/6/2018
Spock... the sneak!
It’s so sweet how much they all care about him! And you write their family dynamic so well
Dutyfree chapter 5 . 2/6/2018
haha! I love them! Great dynamic
WeirdLittleStories chapter 24 . 7/28/2016
That was a lot of fun! Thanks for a great story.
WeirdLittleStories chapter 21 . 7/28/2016
Hee! Spock is really a version of Superman who almost always wears his Clark Kent disguise. It's nice that the crew is getting a chance to appreciate his, um, assets. :-)
WeirdLittleStories chapter 19 . 7/28/2016
Hee! This chapter made me laugh out loud. Love everyone's reaction to Spock in a loincloth. :-)

While it's really Leonard Nimoy's 1967-era Spock that I'd like to see in a loincloth, I wouldn't turn down the sight of Zachary Quinto in one. :-)
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