Oh my gosh this was so funny. Spock can be so totally clueless.
The scene where he was running pa'ash-limuk reminded of a scene in a movie that came out late 70s or early 80s. Wish I could remember the name of it but this story was great.

Interesting story. Definitely didn’t go where I thought it would. It was well-written tho!

Okay, I’m starting to realize that this story wasn’t meant to be taken seriously AT ALL.

LOL

awww, I’m glad he knew exactly what Nyota needed :)

I don’t get why she’s so insecure in this story. It’s a bizarre characterization. But author knows best :)

Uhura is acting really out of character... she’s normally the consummate professional. I don’t like the fact that everyone is talking down to her
but I still have another 13 chapters to go, so I’m sure it’ll all make sense

beautiful imagery in the last couple of lines

I’m used to Uhura being more seems uncharacteristically snarky here. But I agree with her that ensign Mallory is acting weird.

Mallory seems a bit off... this is gonna get pretty interesting :)

Spock... the sneak!
It’s so sweet how much they all care about him! And you write their family dynamic so well

haha! I love them! Great dynamic

That was a lot of fun! Thanks for a great story.

Hee! Spock is really a version of Superman who almost always wears his Clark Kent disguise. It's nice that the crew is getting a chance to appreciate his, um, assets. :-)

Hee! This chapter made me laugh out loud. Love everyone's reaction to Spock in a loincloth. :-)

While it's really Leonard Nimoy's 1967-era Spock that I'd like to see in a loincloth, I wouldn't turn down the sight of Zachary Quinto in one. :-)