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Guest chapter 2 . 6/16/2013
Really cute! I love it!
dejectedsmiles chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
I absolutely loved this! :)
i am a host chapter 2 . 5/2/2011
i love it noebody seems to write mel/jared stories so i am so happy to find this. oh and please please write more
silverbell1 chapter 2 . 8/4/2010
you need to update soooooooooooon please
Davis22 chapter 2 . 7/28/2010
VICKI chapter 2 . 5/19/2010
vicki chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
please write more update please
StarofCalamity chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
What has your being from Denmark got to do with your writing ability?

(actually you write English amazingly for it being a second language :))

Great story
TopKat90 chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
I liked the Story, I think you did a good job. I also would say your English is better then many 13 year olds that speak it as a native language. :)

Separate Entity chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
Hello, my name is Separate Entity and I have a cast of fictional characters from assorted locations running amok both in and out of my head. No, I am not crazy, but imaginary Carlisle HAS tried to diagnose me with imaginary schizophrenia. I have tried (and so have imaginary Abby and imaginary Esme) to convince him otherwise, but it doesn't work. At least, it didn't until I pointed out that I COULDN'T think they were real, why would I go out of my way to say they were imaginary? This is VERY good.

Random Saying For The Chapter: When life gives you lemons, make grape juice and sit around listening to people ask you how you did it.
Ryo Nightray chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
Brillaint story ! I really love the Host, and this is the perfect part that we didn't see in the book! You have a great writing style, and I'm sure your teacher will be delighted when thet read it! plus, I know this doesn't count, but your from Denmark and I love that country! :D

Overall, excellent work!