|Reviews for The Boy in the Water|
| Guest chapter 28 . 10/13/2013
Ok...it is never alright to take a life. So if we go by Bella's reasoning...anyone in Paul's family should be able to kill Edward and it would be alright. They should of let the tribe deal with Paul.
| Guest chapter 18 . 10/13/2013
I can't read this anymore. You are a very talented writer. The character just sucks.
| Guest chapter 16 . 10/13/2013
I hope Edward leaves her ass
| Guest chapter 12 . 10/13/2013
I'm sorry but I can't stand your Bella character. I wish I could slap her.
| Guest chapter 11 . 10/13/2013
Are they even thinking about what Edward would want?
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/13/2013
Bella is being soooo selfish. What will I do? I can't lose him. I don't know why people don't like Jake. He seems yo be the only grown up.
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/13/2013
Poor Liz...Bella should be more sympathetic. It's not all about her. Being a parent I could never imagine that. I don't want to. She is hurting a lot worse then Bella and Bella should be happy they even talk to her about stuff. They could just keep it a family matter and not ask about her opinion.
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/13/2013
Feel bad for jake. Bella needs to understand that friends are important. Edward needs to make time for both. What I see between Bella and Edward so far is teenage love. I don't see soul mate type stuff.
| CrazyHpTwilightLuvr chapter 29 . 8/16/2013
I'm reading! I love this story! :D please continue..
| twilover45454 chapter 29 . 12/25/2012
Gr8 story, more more more please... luv your work!
| Haley chapter 29 . 11/17/2012
This is amazing though I see you last updated like in 2010 I can't believe you didn't finish this amazing story.
| Twilightmommie chapter 29 . 11/9/2012
Love this story. Please finish :)
| Sarah Amin chapter 27 . 9/30/2012
He left her on the eve of their wedding night because he killed the asshole who has been after her and wanted to rip her to pieces .. Those two are strange
| Sarah Amin chapter 26 . 9/30/2012
What's wrong with them .. the girl cant seem to get a break !
| Sarah Amin chapter 24 . 9/30/2012
what does Alice know !
I think it's so much bigger than what she's letting on !