Reviews for The Boy in the Water
rosewoter chapter 29 . 12/29/2011
This is really an amazing story, and very under-reviewed. It's beautifully written and the characters feel so real. Thanks for writing and I hope you update soon.
PenguinsRemindMeOfTwilight chapter 29 . 12/28/2011
Great story! It's sad how no one takes the time to review because this is such a unique story! I know you haven't updated since 2009 and I hope you do because I want them to have a happy ending. Thanks for sharing your story!

Zakhariahz chapter 8 . 12/26/2011
Hi there. Just finished reading How to Paint a House and I'm making my way through this one and as I read your AN, I couldn't help but feel the need to say that I really appreciated the fact that your story is Jake-heavy and I appreciate this story. :) I'll always dislike an unreasonable, unrealistic and desperate Bella but your story's awesome thus far. I go now to read more. :)
Anna chapter 29 . 12/22/2011

have you abandoned it? and if so why?

I think that the character's personalities are very well rounded, sticking to the books and yet original and realistic as well. Also, I like how you combine tragedy and romance, without too much wallowing in one without the other.

I would love love to see this story continued

and btw, i'm loving How to Paint a House :)

VeneziaK chapter 29 . 12/6/2011
Very good story! Really, the storyline and the emotions are described perfectly. The characters seem to change as the story evolves which is I think your greatest achievement. Well done! In my opinion you could let it end here. They fought their demons and they seem to have made full cycle. Not that I would complain if you added more chapters;)
itlnbrt chapter 29 . 12/4/2011
Loved it... thanks for sharing.
itlnbrt chapter 28 . 12/4/2011
Yay.. she better get him.

Now hopefully they both deal with their repressed feelings.
itlnbrt chapter 27 . 12/4/2011
Thanks for sharing.
itlnbrt chapter 26 . 12/4/2011
Uh OH... He brought Jacob!

THanks for sharing.
itlnbrt chapter 25 . 12/4/2011
Great chapter. Thanks for sharing.
itlnbrt chapter 24 . 12/4/2011
Thanks for shari
itlnbrt chapter 23 . 12/4/2011
Thanks for sharing.
itlnbrt chapter 22 . 12/4/2011
Thanks for sharing.
itlnbrt chapter 21 . 12/4/2011
Thank you. Great chapter.
itlnbrt chapter 20 . 12/4/2011
Great chapter. Thanks.
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