Reviews for The Boy in the Water
Guest chapter 2 . 10/13/2013
Feel bad for jake. Bella needs to understand that friends are important. Edward needs to make time for both. What I see between Bella and Edward so far is teenage love. I don't see soul mate type stuff.
CrazyHpTwilightLuvr chapter 29 . 8/16/2013
I'm reading! I love this story! :D please continue..
twilover45454 chapter 29 . 12/25/2012
Gr8 story, more more more please... luv your work!
Haley chapter 29 . 11/17/2012
This is amazing though I see you last updated like in 2010 I can't believe you didn't finish this amazing story.
Twilightmommie chapter 29 . 11/9/2012
Love this story. Please finish :)
Sarah Amin chapter 27 . 9/30/2012
He left her on the eve of their wedding night because he killed the asshole who has been after her and wanted to rip her to pieces .. Those two are strange
Sarah Amin chapter 26 . 9/30/2012
What's wrong with them .. the girl cant seem to get a break !
Sarah Amin chapter 24 . 9/30/2012
what does Alice know !
I think it's so much bigger than what she's letting on !
Sarah Amin chapter 23 . 9/30/2012
why does Emmett akways set up himself to lose !
Sarah Amin chapter 22 . 9/30/2012
Alice will always be Alice ...
Sarah Amin chapter 21 . 9/30/2012
i was going to slap her silly .. he was stupid to jump in to save lauren while drunk maybe ; but what would he be if he just stood there and watched her drown .. plus he found a way to get back to her in the end
Sarah Amin chapter 20 . 9/30/2012
i want him to imprint on leah .. she was left alone in the book where as she was the one jacob should have imprinted on
Sarah Amin chapter 19 . 9/30/2012
i didnt figure it out til now .. i thought he was comatose as in brain dead ..
Sarah Amin chapter 18 . 9/30/2012
Why do they care about Bella .. they could have just left her with the cullens .. why kidnap her .. The pack sucks
Sarah Amin chapter 17 . 9/30/2012
ohh , what did they do to jake & how did they know ...
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