|Reviews for A Tangible Dichotomy|
| 1tinac chapter 33 . 3/12
I loved it ... love these boys.
| goodgodhenry chapter 33 . 11/23/2014
This story is sweet and funny. I love edward and jasper (and their families). They were so awkward and adorabke . Well written and I got quite a few laughs out of it.
| Guest chapter 33 . 9/19/2014
So funny. So sweet and so damned sexy. It ended too soon.
| ncbexie25 chapter 33 . 8/13/2014
I loved this story so much! So sad it's over!
| Fanfic-Critic1805 chapter 33 . 7/14/2014
Wow just wow, where do I begin? This was one of the best, most endearing, well-written, sexy and adorable fanfiction stories that I have ever read! Your writing style is truly amazing and you portrayed both charachters impeccably. The relationship development was absolutely brilliant and do Not even get me started on your amazing grammar and spelling.I literally counted exactly five errors throught the entire story. You don't even know how rare that is! I'm actually overwhelmed by how amazing this was. Thank you so much for writing this. I'm excited to tell you that you will be receiving my first ever 10/10 rating! Congratulations and please continue making a better place!
| Fanfic-Critic1805 chapter 17 . 7/13/2014
Oh my lord! Usually I choose to stay as professional as possible and only comment when I have fully completed a fanfiction, but I cannot even deal with "The only dick I want to suck is Jasper's" I actually rolled out of my bed and onto the floor from laughing so hard! ;)
| BarbyBells chapter 33 . 7/9/2014
i completly love this story! they are so freaking cute together! an amazing story and a fabulous journey! love, tears and laugh! so much laugh. i love the spanish class and is exactly the same happen in latinoamerica... (except me) hahaha xD me encanto tu historia! soy baño? jajajaja muy buena esa! besos!
| Evidence Murderer chapter 1 . 4/14/2014
Fiction MA, adult content with explicit sexual or violent situations, is not allowed on FFn. Please take down "A Tangible Dichotomy" and repost on another site. (If you don't know where to post it, AdultFanFiction and Archive Of Our Own both allow these types of works.)
| Whitlock.Mason.McCarty.Cullen chapter 33 . 4/13/2014
oh my goodness! what an awesomely amazing story! the Edward and Jasper you created were perfect, like down to the Tee! Edward was really very sweet and gentle, I loved him. I loved watching him find his way to something so right for him, even when it was new and confusing! And Jasper was rough and soft all wrapped up in one! The way you broke down his defenses was beautiful. Especially having him always missing Edward way more- it wasn't what you expected but were SO happy to see!
You are a really excellent writer and I really feel like I learned a lot through your literature. wonderful story, really.
| Vestis chapter 33 . 3/26/2014
No words for this 700 page journey! Thank you so much for your work!
| anonymousHumandelinquent chapter 11 . 12/8/2013
Darn! This chappie needed a review! *4 THUMBS UP* (my toes included ;))
| anonymousHumandelinquent chapter 6 . 12/8/2013
I just had to review! Me luv thees *hoping I sound like Laurent...* it sounds pretty much like a fail to me...(shrug)
Anyway! I love itttt! And you deserve a review...thats my third one :D consider urself lucky, ma lady!
| twificfan chapter 33 . 9/1/2013
Thanks, it was a lot of fun. You are a great writer!
| amaia1979 chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
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| Scarebearbabie chapter 32 . 4/14/2013
I love this story but i REALLY REALLY hate how you make edward and jasper like little kids, they are in collage not high school so why in the world is their parents thinking they can tell them whether they can or cannot live together? Then jasper and edward just take it?! Uh no id tell my mom im of legal age and can do what i want and if i wanna live with my boyfriend then im gonna live with my boyfriend. Sorry i just like to state my opinion but other then that this story is amazing(: